Creator, you have the obsession to confuse the reader, right? You don't know how to draw but you also don't know how to write something convincing.
An intruder breaks into a writer's house and the guy instead of running like every rational being, hits the intruder with a baseball bat that's split in half? Is that logical? >:3
It's storyline is a mess! I cannot understand that this this story about, so much new character just keep pop up i even can't understand what they for ... I bet author has no clue that's she's writing about.
Besides there's so much old character's so i think this was drawn is for depressed old geezers!
Also the BL. THERE THE HELL IS BL ANYWAY? Who should i ship i have no clue. It's more a GL even cause MC has a cliche gay friend, so boring!
1/10 author needs some therapy seriously.
Btw, thanks for the topic, made me laugh. Well done, everyone!
Gah! This art style starts off super rough! Shame we have to keep reading it to get to where the art gets good. The characters are all mean! Why don't they just act like real humans???? And don't get me started on the characters. LGBT rep? augh.
By definition I hate all of my work equally, as I need to be as critical as possible about it to improve it.
Only two comics posted so far? Why even bother? Just because they say they'll update weekly doesn't mean they will. And no storyline either, just silly one-off comics. Who does crime drama parodies anyway? The artist doesn't bother with shading either. The comics are short too, like only 2-4 panels. And what's with the suspect character design? They don't look realistic. The detectives are too cartoony looking as well.
Overall, I do not recommend this comic.
A pretentious, lame, depressing, edgy Star Trek ripoff which takes itself way too seriously.
The main character has nothing of a hero, she don't even try to be a nice person nor to contribute to society, nor to make anything good of her life. She thinks that she's smarter than everyone, but actually she's a total mess, just as the Underworld depicted here, there are no rules and no one respects each other.
Also there's too much crime, drugs, guns, monsters, radiation and all that nasty stuff. It's not a children-friendly story, so keep your kids away from it.
Overall, the situations are way too realistic and unrealistic at the same time, and we don't know where the story is going or what it's really about, there's too much mystery and the universe is too complex, which makes it very confusing. So if you wanna sleep well tonight, don't read it.
Who likes horror sci-fi, anyway?
Absolutely horrid ! Only the first episode was released and it's getting on my nerves, it's basically a frame of a story and nothing more. The description & name should have been properly planned and not to mention the cover is so bland. Don't get your hopes up if you dare to read this novel. https://tapas.io/series/Apparition-system-Forsaken-sun1
@Apsinthos Aww, so sad...
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So hands down... okay, the writing is semi-decent, but the cast seems to be all LGBTQ+, first of all. I mean, they can't ALL be gay, can they? The writer insists there's a token straight character but I've yet to see one.
Secondly, the art. Sure, it gets better with each chapter, but isn't the artist supposed to be already good by the time they start a comic?
The writing is semi-decent, but it has romance and drama and then it slowly descends more and more into action/discovery, with slice of life elements mixed in. Oh, and the absolute worst - I started rooting for the elf and the tiefling, but the tiefling is genderqueer and the author recently mentioned that this ship is the most slow burn I've ever seen?
All the characters feel flawed and they make imperfect life choices. Almost like they're young adults with a whole lot of trauma or something. The author has said that if the comic reaches two more subs, the comic will have a completely revamped first episode, so maybe I'll stick around for that to see if it makes the plot have any more sense, but until then, I guess you'd have to be a pretty big DnD nerd to see the appeal of fantasy races in a modern setting.
"Signs Point to Bobbie" is one of the worst comics I've ever read. There's no action or adventure, just random bits from the daily life of a deaf teen? There's not even a solid plotline, just boring everyday life stuff. Who cares what some guy named Bobbie is up to?
Oh, and each strip is only 4 panels. What is this, the "Funnies" page?! I thought Tapas was for legit graphic novels, but ok I guess. đ€š https://m.tapas.io/series/signs-point-to-bobbie/info
The best thing about the comic is that it's cute and charming. The dynamic between a boy and his guinea pig as well as his crush is sweet. Some of the episodes have a good simple message. But the problem is that the first episodes suffer from dated art style but has evolved over time (UPDATE: First three episodes were updated but the next few after this reflects the rough art). Many supporitng characters are just there without being made interesting though the cat and the brother are interesting characters. Some of the episodes suffer from being too ambitous for its own good and I lost sense of pacing in the later episodes. And worse, the dialogue is so stilited that it's something that'll make George Lucas blush. The bright side is that I put lot of hard work and heart into the pic, but it needs much more refinement to be comparable to Dr. Seuss books, Hayao Miyazaki films, or Raina Telgemier's comics. Not bad, but it's pleasant fun grade-B Loud House with enough charm to make up for its major shortcomings. In addition, it falls short of the classics I love from other mediums like Loud House, James Cameron's Avatar, Spy X Family, Bibliophile Princess, Tenet, every Pixar, Mamoru Hosoda, or Ghibli films, Baby Driver, Hilda, and more recently The Super Mario Bros Movie. But I'd take this story over Nomadland and way over Velma any day.
2/5
Trespasser shows that every idiot with a pencil can make a comic. The art bland and mediocre and the writing pisspoor.
Kyara is a clichéd arrogant overconfidant protagonist needing a lesson in humility, and Zack the overdone shy nerdy guy. To make matters worse, the author is clearly hinting at a budding romantic relationship between the two, as if we haven't been dealt this bogstandard hetronormative trash a million times over.
And to make matters worse, the style and setting of the story is completely derrivative of Star Wars!
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Total waste of time, it feels like it drags on. What's it about? Boy gets lost in a strange land? What is this Alice in wonderland? Is it fantasy, dystopian, post-apocalyptic---pick a theme? Listed as romance and fantasy but I've hardly seen anything like that. When's it get exciting? The synopsis explains a decent scenario but so far I'm stuck in a white world full of people in too-tight a jumpsuit who have no clue about the natural world. What an overused trope.
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Waaay too cutesy and over the top. The style's inconsistent and there's TOO MUCH COLOR. Plus, it has bugs as characters. Spiders and wasps? Who wants to see that in a comic meant to be adorable? The main character is too optimistic as well, feels very unrealistic. You'd be better off playing animal crossing rather than spending time reading this!
This is a fan comic with Pokémon in it! Ugh! The story isn't even finished! The characters are too different and too colorful. PLUS the SETTING IS ALWAYS CHANGING!!! This has no ties to any of the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon games!! I don't know why the author tried to improve the art style, IT LOOKS THE SAME THE WHOLE TIMEE! Do NOT read! 0/10
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