Warning: this is one hell of a lengthy post, but I can promise itâll help a thing or two for whoever managed to schlep through it. Hard work pays, remember?
Hey! I chanced upon the thread while I was checking waters in tapas. I saw myself in the struggles youâve mentioned. I also saw the reviews youâve given for all those novels, and Iâm amazed at your persistence and willpower. Thatâs a huge takeover, you know (I might not have read as many original novels all my life, forget about reviewing), and yet you bulled through. So Iâm feeling this moral obligation to share somethings that might help you in your career.
Before we begin Iâd like to say ignore all those that craned their necks and declared: if you arenât writing for fun, only for popularity and money, you should quit. Writing is every writerâs dream and they want to get money from it so they live their dream. Not that boring job which tires out our soul. So itâs nothing wrong to hope to get money out of what we pour our hearts into.
Coming to the point, Iâve read the first five chapters of this âLune Levanteâ. I ought to say itâs, uh, very different from what I expected. I mean it doesnât look like a web novel. Itâs more like a novella set in a fairy-tale-ish world and told in fairy tale style. Iâve glimpsed at your other novel âAngel of Colorsâ. It was a short story with ten chaps, each chap at page length.
If youâre gunning for those kinds of novels, then I must say, youâre toiling in the wrong platform. As far as I know RRL, QI, tapas, and other sites are mainly for web serials, which span for hundreds of chapters. Readers here wouldnât be enthused to pick up a short novel. They look for longer novels they could read for months, as a daily routine. They donât get popular. And people wouldnât pay for them. I think this is one of the major reasons for your lack of success in these sites.
Only by writing long stories and putting extra chaps in premium or patreon could you get money from these platforms. Or you could also post your novel in kindle, but it also needs some solid amount of pages and skill to get noticed.
However, if you want to establish yourself in these sites, you should understand what works for the novels here. Iâm an RRL guy and came to tapas literally just yesterday. So the points I mention might be a bit biased.
First and most important to get noticed is the title of the novel. So many authors churning out so many novels each day. You might post a chap now and ten minutes later youâll see it gone from the siteâs wall, buried under the influx of novels. So in that limited time, the only way you could attract a reader is through the title.
With quirky titles such as âBeware of Chickenâ, âEveryone loves large chestsâ, âa snakeâs lifeâ, you can almost instantly pull a reader into your novel. You could also try to emulate cliche titles that screams the genre of the novel in hopes you could get them. And it also works. Titles such as âarcane emperorâ, âdual cultivation systemâ, âarrogant young master templateâ.
Next most important thing is the first chapter. Thereâs something called âblurbâ that shouldâve been here, but ppl in rrl donât seem to bother about it so Iâm ignoring it. But itâs also important, mind you.
A title can get you readers to check out your novel. But what makes them stay? First chapter obviously. And preferably the very beginning line. You see the first chapter is like a carefully woven trap to readers. You begin with lines that sparks curiosity and interest in your readers. The stronger those lines were, the better. Otherwise if the first lines were regular stuff with some cheesy lines, well, you are going to lose some of those readers.
Example for gripping lines Iâm talking about: (Iâm going to just create them here so no references lol)
âGin sat by the body, wondering what he should do with it.â
âStanding in shadows by a tree, Keith checked and rechecked his resolve to kill the man. It was absurd, but he had no choice.â
Or if youâre writing romance: âBrit watched as Kathie and Carl talked, standing two inches too close, slapping his shoulder playfully. He gulped. Perhaps⌠he should propose to her.â
Yeah, last one might be a bit weird. Itâs not my genre, but hey I tried. Anyway, you can see the point right?
Beginning should evoke the readerâs interest.
In the rest of the chapter, you write how the beginning unfolded in a gritty way. But thereâs an important thing that you must remember. In the rest of the first chapter you should give details about the mc to a certain extent. His aims and his intentions and stuff.
And there ought to be a twist in the ending.
You do this, and I promise you, youâll get more readers.
Of course all that would be pointless if you donât have a good story to follow.
So at heart, itâs all about having a good story and writing it meticulously.
Mark my words: a good story is not about what happens. Itâs about how it happens. So donât worry about taking up cliche ideas. Just worry about how to turn it into your own.
And about you being nonplussed on some mediocre novels getting popular, or getting lucked out, it happens sometimes, but if you observe closely, youâll see those novels couldnât turn into big ones.
For some chance like quirky titles or interesting ideas, they might get lucked out, but if they donât put their heart into it, theyâll fall apart eventually. Luck and other factors can only take you so far, only with hard work can you reach the top and realise your dreams.
Iâm going to give you an example. Once, Iâve come across two novels in rrlâ a latest updates. âSpirit immortalâ and âadventures of an old dreamerâ.
Spirit immortal is written by a newbie author. There were a lot of grammar and prose problems. It hardly had any views in the beginning. But I saw his novel has something to it. A trace of originality and bundles of passion. I move with passion and passion moves me. So I prayed the best for the author.
Adventures of an old man on the other hand is a huge hit with 10k avg views and 1.5k followers. Why? Because of the âoldâ in title and old man as an mc. Thatâs all there is to it. Despite good grammar and prose I just couldnât read past two chaps. The author only had some idea like a spark of inspiration. He went and published without fleshing out the idea.
Result: after a month or so, adventures went into hiatus, but spirit immortal continued. He was only gaining like 10 readers each day, but he didnât stop. He continued against the odds. The novel slowly gained popularity. It took three months to reach 500 followers. Well, at some point he began earning 1.2k$ per month through patreon and he also mightâve earned through kindle. Iâd say itâs a success.
Takeaway: luck and other factors have short life, hard work aces in the end.
Finally be gentle and be open about your opinions. As an author itâs important that you have a broad mind. Being solidly opinionated would severely constrict your creativity. How can you create a plethora of interesting characters and scenes if you limit yourself? So go out of your comfort zones and explore. Itâll help.
Those authors you cribbed about, if they donât have skills, and still, they braved into this novel world, help them if you can. And donât slam them and their tiny dreams. I was one of those hopeless kids when I ventured into this world, if I havenât had the good friends who lent me a hand I mightâve been far gone from the dream I breathe each day.
There are also many parts in your writing I would point my fingers at, but thatâd drag this already lengthy post. You can ask me if you want.
Phew, thatâs⌠one monstrous post. Good luck to anyone who managed to read this. Hope you got something helpful.
Peace out!