More or less agree with the sentiments of "continue if you want to, but don't feel like you have to, but also 2 months isn't that long in comics".
I'll instead focus this reply on a tip that might help out a bit! I agree with @scribesunlimited that it may be beneficial to do a once-over on the grammar/spelling of the dialogue before posting, or maybe try to find someone that can help look at those things if you're not as confident in it
It's not unreadable by any means, but there are a fair amount of people that see a spelling mistake or two, for example, and immediately nope out.
Also take advantage of your readers for that too and don't be afraid to edit episodes with revised dialogue! For example, I noticed in the most recent one someone pointed out "soulds" vs. "souls", you confirmed it was supposed to be "souls", but yet the comic still reads "soulds". I do see that the episode just came out yesterday (?) so you may not have had time to fix it yet, but do try to fix it in the near future. Readers can be excellent tools for catching that sort of thing!
Some other examples I noticed on a quick read through just now:
episode 6:
"That must be enough to send her back to hell"
"hey stupid"
episode 7:
"Demonic Perception"
"Shut up! Shut up! Shut up! Shut up! Shut up!"
episode 8:
"don't worry, Zacky, she won't bother us anymore"
"I'm... (<- apostrophe included ->) I'm sorry-"
"I will do anything to be by your side"
final episode "Apparently you were the only one left in this city."
"I only wish for one thing"
"to kill all of this race"
"and it seems to be haunting a poor soul day and night"
and so on (I started from the last episode and worked my way up but I don't have time to look at the rest right now
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The other thing is the lettering itself. I recall commenting on a previous thread of yours about the hand lettering being a little rough (especially in the first episode though, it gets better after that!) but I see that you've swapped to a typed font in the newer episodes which is probably a good move
I think hand lettering can be cool, but it needs to be neat and easy to read if you do so. A cool trick I've seen people do is to type out the words, set them to a low opacity, and then hand letter over them if you're really adamant about hand lettering because that sets the letter spacing evenly and also gives you a horizontal base-line to work from.
There are also cool sites like https://www.calligraphr.com/en/ where you can make your handwriting into a typable font which is what I do! This way you can work to get each letter looking clean and nice once, then be able to write out the dialogue much faster while retaining the same look. The free version restricts the number of characters you can have in the font, but it's still enough for an upper and lower case of each letter, a number set, and a few common punctuation marks.
The font you have now (eps 8 and 9) will definitely work but it does look a little generic. Not the end of the world but if you don't want to make your own custom font, you may consider continuing to look into other font options to use- typically a "handwritten" class font looks best in comics. Lastly, I would recommend centering the typed text into the classic diamond word bubble shape. Right now it looks to be left-aligned but it'll fit in better with other comics if centered, I think.
This got to be long, but hopefully at least somewhat helpful
Best of luck with your comic!