Nothing exciting, but I'll do a spoiler anyway for readers that may be here.
Spoiler
Almost done with colors, then I'll need to reink it, add a little details with white ink and I'll be done. I got a little behind due to life bs, and crowdfunding stuff coming in, so I'll probably wait till next week to update.
I'm not a pro or anything, and I think your page looks fine, but here's stuff I know if that you may or may not know too. Everyone does things differently, but having a line of action is always useful.
You don't have to make everything cartoony, but it gives more weight to a punch when it has a slight exaggerated flow, like your character is throwing their weight into it. I don't exaggerate a lot myself, but when a character is doing a quick action (like a punch or throw.) a break the anatomy of the arm a little bit or whatever body part is doing the most action, while exaggerating the pull of the clothing and/or hair. Even thought it's not "correct" it shows how strong the motion is.