Here's mine, it's my lastest work
The action looks fine, it's the breaking of the 180 degree rule that makes it hard to read. The characters switch sides and the facing changes sides. try to keep people in scenes facing and interacting on the same 180 degree facing. So if the hero is on the left, keep them on the left unless you show with movement them switching sides. Look up 180 degree rule for more information o this. It's a standard film rule.
True true. I was hoping the second panel in the middle would resolve the 180 problem since the character is facing left then front and then right, but I think it still might be unclear. Might just have to flip a few things.
This is looking incredible already! The characters look very expressive.
This is looking amazing! And you're doing it traditionally as well, that's mad impressive.
Thanks. For me, a character's expressions are as important as storytelling.
Just finished lineart for this panel!
Really gotta stop going all out on these. I am so behind. This coming week is going to be fun :')
Such a smooth art style.
This is really REALLY early stages, nothing but stick figures and word bubbles.
BUT, I just posted page 47 half an hour ago... and this panel is from page 75. So I'm proud of that.
God I wish I can show you what we just finished.
My brain has switched from narcoleptic to insomniac recently and this WIP is how I feel.
My main character, Fresh!Sans, having a not-so pleasant conversation with his inner demon.
That facial expression is such a mood
It's in the flats stage and I've been procrastinating aha...
I just finished this panel a few minutes ago, I still have a lot to make before 15 days!
Yooooo looking good though
Hahahaha, of course!!!THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
I'm also working on a call to action comic! I've been mulling over whether or not to reboot my current comic, so I started reworking it. with this contest going on, I figured it'd be a good time to at least get out of a slump I've been in and maybe start working on comics again!
Establishing shot I just finished :]
Cross your fingers for me. I've got six days to get my next update out on time hahaha
