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Dec 2020

I know that when I do my comic, I through ups and downs and some weeks the page looks amazing and some weeks it looks like crap. Show your best and worst right now. Try not to just show your oldest pages for the worst as of course we all improve naturally over time. This is to show your highs and lows from day to day.

The first is from August and the second was a few days ago. Sometimes I just can't do backgrounds. I originally did have a background in the second pages, but it was too ugly so I removed it. I'll probably insert a background in a few weeks when I get more of my grove back.

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From latest update: Chapter 5 New Life
THE BEST


Something I'm struggling with is the flow of the pages, how easy it is for the reader to follow the panels, and I think I did pretty well with this one:

THE UGLIEST


No only did I forget the rain in the first panel, but the third one where the spiky hair guy shoots bubblegum to the carnivorous plant (yes, it was a carnivorous plant) feels strange now, as if it doesn't express properly the fight from that angle, and the last two panels have onomatopoeias that are just too big and noisy with all that light beam added

I love how the plant looks. Something about it is so goofy-looking, yet lovable. :joy: