Work on refining and defining season one. You can't decide whether piece of writing is "good" if you haven't properly wrote it to see what will need improvement.
From what I saw in your previous thread, you were a little too general with your plot points. Which is fine-you were writing the structure. But, based on my own experience writing, I need to outline in much more detail in order to understand cause and affect. Right now, you have very broad ideas for seasons- but you don't know how long they will be. You might even find the second season can be split into two seasons, who knows.
Here's an example with outlining. (I am aware you were just writing a structure, but my personal tip is expanding it.)
You wrote:
"He finds real chosen one, named Nobody, and sneaks him on his hero quest in his team."
But how? I feel like a plot point would be multiple scenes- and you have opportunity to characterise.
Here's how I would take this and outline it if I were writing (not accurate to your story obv, but just as an example.
- The main character is seen seeking the original source for the chosen one myth.
- They enter an abandoned city, which only has the source of the prophesy left, which is guarded.
- They sneak past the guards, and upon doing so, notice another person doing so as well.
- They at first worry this person is an enemy, but after he signals for them to stay silent and helps them sneak through, they begin to trust him.
- Nobody, at the last minute, locks the character's out of the room with the prophesy, making the main characters see him as an enemy.
- However, upon seeing the prophesy, Nobody realises he can't actually read it, leading to him having to beg the main character for forgiveness and help.
- The main character's question why Nobody even needs to see the prophesy, and he stays silent.
- The main character goes to read the prophesy, only to find that to his surprise, it isn't him but Nobody that is the "chosen one."
- Nobody then admits he needed to see the prophesy for himself, to confirm why all these strange events are happening in his life, and that this information is potentially dangerous.
- The main characters accept him onto their team, seeing him as a valuable asset.
(Then you'd probably detail how they snuck out.)
Like this is still kind of vauge, but it gives you a better idea of what happens. Making it not generic can be in the details, and you would have something to work with and edit because you'll have a clearer vision of the story.
I feel like the main reason you prefer season 2 is because it has this BIG EPIC plot, but by focusing too much on that, you'll miss establishing smaller things and making the character's interesting. You just need to slow down, and expand on your ideas.
You'd be surprised how one plot point can expand! Just work on writing your first season, editing and making it stand on its own. You can hint and lead towards the second season, but you yourself need to enjoy the first season.
