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Sep 2021

So the title says it all really. I'd love a bit of feedback for a couple of variations on a potential cover. I'm not too interesting in technical art advice like anatomy and style ect. If you wanna drop some art critique feel free, but that's not really what I'm here for. I'm more interested in what works and doesn't for the covers. For instance, I quite like the desaturated ones, but I'm not sure they stand out enough, most of Tapas is colour and I don't want make people think the comic is B&W when it's colour, but I think the title seems to stand out better on the desaturated ones.

Cover A

Cover B

Cover C

So, please let me know your general thoughts and anything from one of multiple that works or doesn't or could be combined (or if you just hate them all together and I think I should scrap it and work on a new idea, I guess) or anything else. And thank you in advance to anyone who gives me their time.

EDIT: A new variant mixed between a few different covers and some feedback has been created.

Cover D

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I personally like cover B, but the cover entirely depends on what you're trying to convey or there should be at least a focal point on your cover. I believe in this case would be the person's face and the card?

I would suggest maybe taking Cover C and desaturating the colors of the person holding the card a bit. Then duplicate the layer, apply gaussian blur on the duplicated layer and erase just the portion of the person's face and the card so that your cover at least has a focal point that when a person sees it, their eyes would be redirected towards it immediately.

I hope this helps!

The lineart gives me strong mystery drama (maybe a little horror) vibes, and I think cover B follows those vibes, though the picture having color like in A and C draws the eye towards it

Ok slight update taking some of the feedback in a sort of mix of several different versions. (I'll stick it up in the first post as well)

Cover D

So any further feedback would be great.

There is an improvement on D one compared to the others, I think it looks the best

My worthless two cent here:

  • I do think you still need more contrast of colors between the image and the background, especially from afar the colors look muddled. The thin white outline didn't help too much, maybe made it thicker, add glowing effect, or change the main text color.
  • You can position the coverperson to be a bit lower, so the title can have a bigger space to shine, if you wish. I'm not good at describing composition, but I think it can be improved.
  • Extreme art nitpick, but I think you can add minute amount of highlight or bright line art (at where the light direction is) to the artwork of the person. From afar they can be kinda difficult to see. To emphasize the card, you can also make it a "light-source," or give it a glowing effect.

Also as a note from mobile user, here is how your series' cover would appear. I think that would look 'smaller' in desktop, so you can take note. Especially in contrast of another cover in second picture, you can see how clear title can draw your eyes to a cover especially compared to another b/w cover. I picked 'Mystery' genre for this example.


Yeah the title has been causing me a lot of problems tbh. I've been sort of messing around with a white one that might be better and some slightly different layer effects. Haha it's a lot of trial and error right now.

And wow I've just noticed how badly this one exported its so blurry but nevermind.

I think the dash of blue does great and now the title is fully visible from afar!

Also is the title design set in stone or is a part of what you don't wanna touch about? If not I might have something under the summary. Please note that this is just an opinion and I have never studied graphic design, so take it with a grain of salt.

Summary

If you don't mind (sorry if you do), now I notice something with the logo as it's now highly visible. I am not good at communicating it, but maybe the composition of letters.


I try to manipulate the placement a bit (shitty tracing of the logo as I'm on my phone). Also I forgot to close the gap between 'Rh' and 'a'

Straight


Tilted 'Z'

I also test it on the cover (used the old D one).

Improved D version

Straight version, I think more dynamic is needed.


Tilted 'Z'

Thanks! Yeah the title's not set in stone, it's a mock up to mess around with while I figured out how the cover might look. I always intended to clean it up, so no problem. And thank, I've been considering the colours of the lines a lot so it's nice to see someone else considering some colour in it too.