You need to work on your writing. Not just grammatical errors but it's hard to take your narration and dialogue seriously when you get the words wrong. It's not confusing. It's more like a very odd form of speech that creates a bump in the storytelling.
Anyways, here's this...
thank u for the amazing review <3
well I'm so impressed with ur character drawing (looks cool tbh) plus interesting cartoonish color pallets
u just have to work more on perspective and backgrounds so u can make it flawless 
good luck on it!
thank u so much for reviewing and for sharing that amazing Comic !!
really love the coloring and the vibe that it gives me.
perfection is all I have to say especially after reading the latest episode .
thank u so much for the honest critics 
I'll work more on that
About "The Rainy Days", it looks cool if only u could draw the illustrations on paper then scan them to add values (cause the pixelly lines look so disturbing )I dont know if u're using a graphic tab or not but if u do I recommend using a modern drawing software .the story has it's own feeling ,really love it!!
The art is really solid, and I like the aesthetic with the soft /pencil lineart. Still a little early to tell with the plot but its a good start! @mugenotasu
Hey, check out my new comic Mr.Pantsu's adventures. If you're interested in immature jokes or humour, then you might like it.
love the art style and the mystery at the start is intriguing, wished it had more so I could give you feedback on the story and such, but for what you have I'd say you got a good start, the colours and sketchy art style works well and the characters look unique and interesting. I'll keep and eye on this one for now too see where it goes =)
if you like fantasy check out mine
Hello I'm new here at Tapastic . Hope you will guide me through things that I need to know ^_^
This is my Comic, hope you will enjoy reading it
I'm pretty mediocre art and comic wise, so I hope my review is somehow helpfull. As the others sayd, your art is amazing and the story got me catched ^^ The things with the boxes already got pointed out by others. So, my aditional thing to point out is: How often do you plan to upload? For art such as yours it's understandable if it takes longer but people don't want to wait long for new updates. Especially later, when you have more readers.
And here is my stupid litle comic. For a glance at the latest pages I would be thankfull. The first chapters look horrible, just as a warning!... Well at least I got some improvements.
I really liked your comic Tales of Lonia. It does remind my of the Souls series where the story has an air of mystery and its view of the world is very pessimistic. The more realistic art style and more muted colors fits the comic thematically.
Although your font of choice doesn't quite reflect the tone and mood of your comic, it looks to professional. You could use a font that invokes sadness as your main font. You should also use different fonts based on the mood of the character who is speaking. Also you could play around with the shapes of your speech bubbles based on the mood of the character like the font. You could also do the same thing with the frames. You can refer to the Dragon Ball Z manga for that.
Overall, this is a good comic that wears its inspiration on its sleeves and makes it their own. A few technically tweaks can bring out your comic's full potential.
Here's a link to my comic "My Hollow Heart" my first short story.
thank u for reviewing my webcomic <3
considering Kao, I really enjoyed the plot as much as the special characters in it. there are some mistakes when it comes to anatomy and composition but dont worry about it, the amazing progress u're having through the comic will soon erase those mistakes .
keep it up 
thank u for subscribing !! and for the the good feedback
really love the colors u put in ur comic as much as the unique artstyle and the composition <3 .
keep up mate , I really love it !!
thank u for submitting <3
so emotional with all the well drawn expressions .really wanna know more about the story .
keep it up pal
thank u for submitting and for reviewing my webcomic <3
I will try my best to post one episode every month cause of the few time I have for drawing .
about "The story of Osram" that's a good readable comic (not stupid at all)
I can see the progress through the chapters so no worries if there are some little struggles when it comes to composition and proportions .
as I said t's a Good comic
keep it up !!
thank u so much for the amazing review and for submitting ur webcomic <3
I really like the colors u're using on ur comic, the OCs and the songs too (they're making it more emotional)
tho u should work more on the backgrounds and it shall be perfect .
but still it's an amazing work, keep it up!!
I will be first to admit my backgrounds are something to be desired, but i will try to work on that for the future. I am a big stickler to color theory because it can help tell the reader about the character without you knowing about them, besides its kind of fun to pick the colors they are going to be wearing. As for the songs, I think music really enhances the mood you should try to listen to a song while reading your comic and see what happens.
