Holy crab apples your stuff is amazing!
I'm in love with your shape language and composition! Every panel is bursting with personality, telling its own story! You have a real skill for directing your audience's eye!
I really love looking at your style...is there somewhere else I can get more of it?
The dialogue is pretty well constructed too, it flows organically, parallel to the time period.
The one thing that seemed a little off to me was the font and speech bubble placement. You're telling such an epic tale with warm colors and pencil lines, so the stark black and white times new roman font is pretty jarring. That aside, I can't wait for the next update!
I've also got a comic here, it's pretty mediocre, but I'd appreciate any direction you can give me!
If you get bored, you can just skip to the newer pages! Thank you for your time!