My review for you:
Wonderful lighting and use of color! The shape of the elements contributes to a nice flow and sense of movement. Your line quality, coloring style, and narrative are cohesive and harmonious.
I think it would be worth spending more time on universe establishment/exposition, (I myself am guilty of skimping on exposition) either retroactively or in future, because I am definitely interested but having trouble telling what’s going on. (I have read some other chapters and I’m still a tad confused)
I think the square bubbles look nice, but I would watch the shape and size and make sure not only your lettering fits evenly in the bubble, but also your bubbles fit into the panels without interrupting pace/flow.
Here’s my series, if you’d like to check it out:
Thanks for the opportunity to share! Good luck with your series!