Well, you use a number of adverbs. They could be reworded to describe more, but that's not something definite you have to worry about. Just to be clear, adverbs are words that end in -ly. And after "OUR END", you start a new paragraph with "you see" but it's not capitalized. Is that intentional or a typo?
How I felt, hmm, to describe it. I felt a man seeking vengeance on the world, prepared to do anything, and you showed the setting quite well. There isn't much I could tell you to fix or change, as I myself found it good. Anyway, you've got a good story and I can't wait to read more!