I need a real review and feedback on the novel I am working on. I know prob one of the reason was the language., that one I am still working on (English is not my first language), the other one would probably the immaturity of the story itself.... coz I am basically a newbie in writing world. But I sometimes I wish the reader would drop me good feedback on why they dropped my novel and not just unsubscribing and poof. Especially after they commented on the first chapter and two that they enjoyed the story. Sorry If I am ranting, just ... can't help to lose my confidence seeing more people dropping my novel. I know that I need to pay attention to those who stay than those who left. But....I need feedback/ review to learn to be better.
So please.... could anyone tell me what's wrong with my novel? Should I even keep going on?
Plz? I need a review on the story itself, not the grammar, structure, and language skill wise. I just need to know if my story is interesting enough or not.