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[firgofumbra]

Great color as always, Riko - I also love the breakout onomatopoeia. Nice touch.

This one took for eeeeeeever. I've never drawn so many panels on a page before!
It took me literally the whole day to get it done - but I do like it. You'll have to zoom in on it though; I could barely cram all the text I wanted into the 940px that Tapastic limits us to.

250% zoom ought to do it. Ctrl and Plus/Minus zooms in and out on Chrome and Firefox I believe.

[Benzy]

I really enjoy the style and how clean the black grey and white is with this comic. However the walls of text is a bit hard to look past and something that easily dissuades people from reading. I know I myself have had problems with putting too much text on a page and it's a difficult thing to work around but it's definitely worth it. Try spreading the text across more panels. One of the ways I worked around it was limiting how many sentences I out in a word bubble.

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This is the newest page of Discount Religion It has some bad language in it so beware.

[azureXtwilight]

Wow,the coloring and shading is awesome! you got a new sub, my friend

Latest page on Re:Set

[agentfink]

@azureXtwilight Wow! Action packed scene! I really like the movement you have in your panels-- the blur is very effective. I wonder who the guy with the knife is-- AND-- who was his intended victim? Very cool

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[AngieVX]

@atlas Thank you! I wanted to show the scene how the dog's seeing it. I have no idea how it actually is, that's how dogs see scenes that they can't resist helping, in my imagination . Also I wanted to give this scene a certain amount of tension.
P.S.: The artwork of your comic looks great!

[donathinfrye]

@agentfink -- I'm very excited about The Pale, first off. Out of the recent crop of new comics that we're both a part of, you're one of the ones that everyone should be watching.

The newest page? Great writing and dialogue. And the art style continues to be striking and effective, even in the less sweeping and more conversational panels. If your goal was to draw and write something that feels like an ominous amalgam of The Walking Dead and True Detective, then you've nailed it. If you didn't have those two franchises in mind as inspiration ... well, you still nailed it.

And now, for the newest page of Atonement! This page was particularly challenging for us as we continue to try to establish a unique style for the comic.

[agentfink]

@donathinfrye

Your review totally made my morning...
(great job on your comic too-- looks great and very distinct!)

[Kaos_Comics]

@donathinfrye He failed a very important rule... never turn your back on an opponent. Very cool cgi!
@agentfink LOL Shee-it is right! And so is don. I loved your new Pale page!

Here is this weeks Super-Dud

[Aspie_Gamer]

Something about that rock seems magical

Latest Life of an Aspie page (30)

[Kaos_Comics]

@Toad_Sta_Ovn Hmmm... you'll have to come back and check in next week... or subscribe and never miss out LOL

[Jrej]

I love your gaming references.
You are able to put in so much text! I don't know how I manage but I can only put a few words per bubble. I guess you didn't draw captain falcon in is second panel... I'd love to see on of you attempts on that!

Here's the latest page of Shades Of Men!

[danitasibert]

Well my most recent page is just concluding a out of control chase scene with the main protagonist getting the jump on no good robbers, Marc meets Captain Howard the captain of the Famousland Police Department. They keep bumping heads, but Howard successfully captures the criminals and and Famousland can have a peaceful night....... or do they...?

Lastest chapter here: http://tapastic.com/series/Maximum-Chaos

[Aspie_Gamer]

I like the expressive face in panel three. Its like she saw the unspeakable.

You'll have to read the previous two pages to understand the joke here.

Life of an Aspie

[Cielle]

@Toad_Sta_Ovn lol Captain Falcon. I think this page does a good job of showing the important moments in this situation to make the joke really click. I also like what you're doing with the color/tones on this page. It has a clean feeling while still maintaining an interesting texture that matches the rest of the comic well. Nicely done!

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Here's the latest page of Reus. I'm not exactly 100% sold on or committed to all the sound effects here. I don't usually use them, but I thought this time they were necessary to convey the sentiment...idk though. What do you think? is it too much??

[gnekomikero]

@Cielle This page is too intense and dramatic. I love the bottom last 2 panels, where the girl was really surprised and feel so unease and the guy who is insidious plus with the zoom in of face which gives him some thrill. well im very interested what's next.

and yeah here is my newest page of BOMB A Where joji did all his attack but still it useless to his new enemy which might be involve of missing children case in Toril Town.

[Damatris]

@gnekomikero Nice action page. I really like those 2 top panels on the left side. They have really good intensity. And the pacing works really well too on the whole page. I'm not exactly sure what's going on in the first panel tho. It might be because I haven't seen the previous page but I can't really place where the jumping figure is going or how how they tried to attack. But really, this is good action page and I like your line work!

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Fallacy has a wrap for chapter 5 with sad looking people.

[Aspie_Gamer]

I like the color scheme ya got going on there.

From yesterday's update of Life of an Aspie

[Kaos_Comics]

When in doubt become a nun lol

This weeks Juvies has a cameo from a really funny strip called Dead Days.

[Squeakybat]

It's a funny strip. It has some nice gags!

Mine is called Stellar Persona. It's also on Tumblr.

[agentfink]

@Squeakybat
Because you posted a cover, I went in to read a few pages of your comic... very cute upbeat feeling! I like your attention to detail in your lettering and your emphasis on the reaction of Danny (poor kid! stage fright is horrible!) Your cover art is really good too and reflects what your comic is about and is a good indicator of the overall tone. Good work!

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