Tell us about your newest page! Comment on the one above first!

[ikushina]

So beautiful drawn! I love the use of colors, and the way you drew their hair and eyes!

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wow, poor person who has to comment on this hahaha

http://tapastic.com/series/Unfortunate-yaoi
whoops, forgot to tell something about it. um, they just went out the cinema, and.. yea, kiss xD I did use some effort in it, but not 110%. I just wanna deliver a dumb gay story quick, so dfnkgdf his hand looks terrible omg

[ragraphx]

Adorable comic ikushina.. Great emotion visuals, very nice font and the background with the hearts is a nice simple/creative touch. You've got some great things going, stay confident in your work and keep it going.

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The newest page from Mighty Glad

The Leowolf leaps toward Glad & Verah!!

[ErithEl]

@ragraphx To begin with, I already love and subscribe to your comic – and more people definitely should because it is awesome.
On this page specifically, you have shown the action well of this creature leaping at your main characters (off-screen). You really get a sense of how fast it is moving, and how much of a threat it presents, so great job! The thorny border around the page also is a nice, unique touch to your comic, and really helps set the atmosphere of where it takes place!

Here is my newest page of Burning Bright To give a little context, it's a fantasy comic about two friends transported to another world where the inhabitants are animal-human hybrids.

[ArtistHan]

Hey, I'm already subscribed to you! haha

I really liked the humor in this page. It made me chuckle, and seems realistic in that the character has his doubts. However, as your subscriber, I have to say that one of the things that keeps me from reading your comic consistently is 1. the page by page upload and 2. the color scheme. I feel like you have an intriguing plot and although page by page works for people who post maybe three or more times a week, I don't feel inclined to read as loyally when I only get one page about every week or so. Also, I've noticed that for a while now, everything has had a green color scheme. It's fine as that's part of that world and setting but after weeks of seeing green whenever I check out your comic, my eyes find themselves wandering elsewhere. But like I said, I really like your story, I wish I could see more of it at once! And again, this page had great humor!!

I've posted my comic on this thread a few times but am doing so again because the feedback has been helpful! Just uploaded a new chapter yesterday:

THE UNDERGROUND

[ErithEl]

@ArtistHan Thanks for the feedback! Oh man, I wish I could upload more than one page a week. If only I could work on the comic full-time instead of working my regular job 5 days a week... LOL

[ArtistHan]

Guh, I know the feeling

[Cielle]

@ArtistHan interesting use of perspective on this page! I'm digging it. One thing however is that the images don't line up from page to to page. It's very slight, so it's hard to tell if it's intentional or not. If it is intentional, perhaps exaggerating it a bit more would make it obvious. On the other hand, if the pages are supposed to line up, you might need to tinker with the pages a little. I was also a little confused at first that the boy's hair kept switching from black to white and then back again, but I can see why you did it. I think it's fine to do on occasion, but I would recommend saving that color inversion technique for select, really important moments. But anyway, good work! Keep it up ^.^

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Here's the next page of Reus. I'm not entirely satisfied with this page (I know it needs some work...), so I'm anxious to get some feedback on it haha. ha.

[jecie]

Love the costumes on the characters. Especially the female.the perspectiveswth the checkered floor gives off a disorientating feel to the page. I'm not sure if that was what you were going for.

Good expressions also, really helps what they are thinking even without reading the dialogue

Here's mind from http://tapastic.com/series/Carnivore-of-Flesh

[infectedbloodcomics]

Really great colors and nice panels. It reminds me more of single illustrations/paintingd than a comic, however it's really nicely done!

Today, in The Green-Eyed Sniper, things get soft

[Volucris]

Oh my, I just went and read the last page (and some more) and things are getting really dramatic! If I'm just giving feedback for that page only, I love the different perspective you use, the contrast in the middle, and of course the way you heighten the tension!
(Please don't kill Sekhmet! Ahhhhh)

Great work!

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This is my latest page from Fox Rain, after I finished I forgot to add trees... ugh - please excuse my empty background!

[HNLEE]

EDIT: omg i must have mistaken this thread for the other newest page thread without commentary
so sorry i didnt comment on the one above, i'll do it now

@Volucris Rox rain has a very dramatic feel to it. The main girl has a good design and the expressions fit perfectly into the scene. The white outlines also help bring focus to the characters. Overall a great job, sorry I was not able to do this sooner.

[ragraphx]

Great use of colors and lighting.. You set the scene and mood very nicely HNLEE.

Here's the newest page from Mighty Glad
Verah blasts the fierce Leowolf running at her and Glad!!!

[Waterdrain]

Oh wow! I really like your use of colors and effects ragraphx, I also like the way you broke up the panels too C:
Here's the latest page for my comic Out of the Ordinary

[toherrys]

Oohh excellent use of black space and contrasts! Cool character design too and a nicely drawn bike.

Here be my latest update to Unknown Lands

[Alexandritea]

@toherrys I really love the way you draw faces, and you have a fantastic sense of colours
and shading (but i suppose the shading is a part of the colour picking xD) I have seen a lot of your
works and i admire every one of them, even the sketches o3o you have a real talent <3

This is the latest page i've made of my comic In the name of the creator

[toherrys]

Oh my, thank you!! ;-;

[CaptainJuuter]

@Alexandritea I have seen your comic around before, and I have to say the concept/story of it seems very interesting and original. Your art is very detailed and I love the way you've gone about coloring and shading. I noticed you also used/included some alien type scripture/text which was very cool. Did you create that all yourself? if so did it take a lot of time? how did you base the design?

As for my latest page page it is a double -update, my story is Lance x Saber and Here is the last page (it is an adventure-fantasy story)

[mappypaint]

@CaptainJuuter I'm a fan of your comic and I really like the style and colors of it. On the last page, it really shows the immediate bonding of the group as they start on their new adventure together.:)

Latest page for u-speed is this one...

last time I posted here it was part 1, and now its part 6.XD

[keii4ii]

@mappypaint Aw, is he blushing in the second panel? ^^ I like that you're not skimping out on the environment/backgrounds. And not just stuff like the buildings or the plant; drawing those stripes on the shirt of that one background character, for example, shows that you put a lot of work into this.

A rare incidence for Heart of Keol: a single-image update. Usually my updates get chopped up into multiple images because they get rather long! ...Or tall, as the case may be!

[mappypaint]

@keii4ii Oh yes he is, waiting for his first ever "date". ^u^ I like taking my time on backgrounds, and that background character is one of the guest OCs so I made sure I put all the details on them but hopefully not to much that it draws away the focus on the main characters.