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First off, what a coincidence! Last night I grabbed a random character from the folder of characters people have given me for cameos in my comic and it just happened to be one of these guys! I'm excited to be drawing him! : D
Anyway, onto the actual page, it looks fantastic! Your pages look so clean yet they don't look empty or dull at all. I like the softer colors you use for this page up til we get to the pizza place, which looks very welcoming and totally a place I'd try. : P
I also like that I realized it was a bus they were standing in front of in this page, which I think is great considering I didn't know the context of this page and that door and background could probably easily be confusing if it wasn't pulled off as well as it was. Overall, great job!

Here's the latest page of City of Blank!

Nice page dude! The colors are amazing and super crisp! I have a knack for silent pages that are well done and I really like this one because words are definitely not necessary for this page :3! I also have to note that you are very good with cityscape shots such as the one in the first panel, hell, you're actually just really good with architecture in general! It looks almost like this came out of an animated show or something. Great work! smiley

This is my latest page from Cosmos Song1 , it's a short Friday page xD!

Oh, this is another killer panel layout page for you -- excellent setting and scene establishment as you move us from macro to micro and slowly eliminate the details so we can focus on the conversation and gestural cues of the characters. That kind of attention is amazing. And as, always, your rendering is beyond tight. I seriously admire the details and beautiful, crisp semi-realistic depictions of the environments these characters are in. AND WHOA, double bubbles in the bottom panel sets and they play off the character's expressions effectively (the two with Howard shocked at Fink's call's hilarious, "FINK!"). Visual pleasure, your pages every time.

Little underwhelming to follow-up The Pale, geez! Here's page 62 of There's No Such Thing as Jason -- I.T.1, still in Jason's dorm room with these two sneaksters. Might've gone a little too bold with the angles here, too. Not my strong suite, heh!

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Brilliant coloring and clean linework.
Panel 2 is kinda unclear though.
I like the rounded corners of the panels, too.

Interesting. I like the chaotic feel of the page! Here's the latest page from my comic1.

@GFalconDX You've created very nice perspectiveson the this page, I also enjoy your shading and you succed very well in giving these characters a unique look. I might have to take after your shading of cloth because I'm at a loss for how to do that well. I feel like the dialogue in the third panel is a little off. Particulary the "Why are they always trying to start a war?!" and the reply to that "I don't think so, Brandon". I'd change what Brandon says there. Maybe to something like "Are they trying to start a war?!" or "Are they trying to strat a war again?!" depending on the context which I'm not sure about, so that piece of criticism may be moot depending on what's going on and the history here.


In today's Voidhild, which you can read in full here1, our proagonist attempts to charge the spirit of motherly love to no avail.

I like the use of only the 1 colour. It's like Sin City where colour was only used for certain effects.

So 7 years ago I did this Juvies1 Pin Up

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@YuliaCandylun what an expressive page! I think the characters' personalities really shine through with their words and actions. I had to read through Frida's little speech a couple of times before I really understood what she was trying to say, but she sure is enthusiastic! I also really like her cury-toed shoes. So cute! keep up the good work ^.^


Here's the latest page of Reus. Max is overloaded with baked goods. Who will she share them with...???

@Cielle Whoa, how much time did that second panel take? Look at all this background detail! And it must have been a pain to lay out too. That's awesome =) Also the lighting in the first panel is really nice.

In the latest page of Lady Unlucky, I get to mess with all the special effects again. >D

https://tapastic.com/episode/339010

I like the compositions of the paneling. It's classic superhero but also modern, A+ mix :Ub



I can finally upload this page of Cosmic Fish1 eyyyyyy

I really love the color scheme you're using. the shading is fantastic and i love the animation in the middle panel. The facial expressions really matches the mood you're setting.The poses that you draw also really helps set the emotion of the character even further. Over all, fantastic job c: !

in this update of In the Name of the Creator1 it's mostly meant to show one,built up, event in one whole page.

@YuliaCandylun Hey there! In this thread, you're supposed to comment on the person above you! Just a reminder for next time wink You skipped over @Kaos_Comics page! (I hope I am not becoming the thread police!)

@Kaos_Comics... Fun page!
Because this is a pinup (not a comic page) I'll write my impressions in regards to the characters. I really like the colors of the sun and expressions of the people. It's amazing that this is from 2009, I can see where the characters are still the same but you changed their designed to be more efficient for web comics. That evolution is great to see!

@Alexandritea beautiful colors on this page! That graphic symbol is really eye catching. I dig the greens and the effects going on here! I checked out a few pages back and like the overall tone of your comic. Consistent colors and execution in art. But I will say that your lettering needs a bit of work. It's a great font, very easy to read, but my issue is how it fits in your bubbles. Sometimes the bubbles are too tight around the words (p8)... sometimes the words don't fit the bubble nicely (p11) if there were something to keep in mind and improve-- it would be there. Overall good job!


The Pale 1.27

@agentfink Ahh I'm such a fan of your work!! The clean lines and the beautiful balance of your panels really shines through on this page specifically. There's such a great flow to the word bubbles, too. Overall great quality work as I've come to expect from you smile

Latest page of Radio Silence1:

yeah 2009 wasn't a good one. probably my mind blocking everything automatically when I see it lol

but page is funny! nice! everything simple and with humor. hope u grow well since then as well!)