Im more of a writer and from a writers perspective, I like how its a gag with a faint. Establishing shot serves its job, the middle panels serve as the feint threatening the cliche of "bad luck new kid", but the gag escalates to vehiular assault leading to aprooval! The fact that most of the gag is off panel engages me, so good job on writing that sequence.
Anyway heres my dumb panel.
Its from a stream of conciousness speed comic called The Confounding Chicken-Man, #2 Tactics a.k.a Grave Nemesis.
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