@Kaos_Comics
The art style's great. Super expressive. I love the pull back panel with the brandishing of the knife! The writing is low key and funny, and though the story's a few pages long, each page establishes something new and unexpected, then resolves its own gag in the final panel. It's a really fun idea, executed at a high level. There are a few punctuation inconsistencies, which could very well be purposeful and didn't detract at all from the rest of the page for me.
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My newest page of Atonement is the beginning of the last stretch of pages in its prologue. We're beginning to resolve a couple of our initial, establishing mysteries and characters here. At this point, the reader's still yet to see any dialogue, or even a sound. My hope's that the introduction will intertwine well, and that when it does come together, we'll have created a great way to introduce the unique setting without too much expository writing.
