Absolutely, I read and left a comment with my thought on it. Your first chapter is a nice start, and I'm looking forward too seeing how your story continues @LiW !!
Did the same for you @milgray , really love your story and art! The action is fast-paced, the characters are vividly depicted, and their expressions and reactions are shown really clearly and dynamically. I had a lot of fun reading. I'll be waiting for more!
I read your first five chapters so far @SugarCube and left some comments. I am enjoying your story and love the imagery you use as you write - my only big note is that I found the POV to be slightly confusing. Keep up the good work!
Already subbed and in the process of reading your work @NGChloe - I really love the intensity of your story and your writing!
@The_Chosen_Z I read the first couple episodes (my Portuguese is super bad so its slow going for me haha) but I really like your work so far. Your story is a lot of fun and the art style is really great!
@primehkm I've read through your first few chapters - I think you have a really interesting concept, and I'm already curious about how Ryu chooses to move forward! I did find some of the grammar a bit shaky but that's always a fairly simple fix; addressing it would help draw readers in more though.
And @Agnivrat03 I enjoyed your story so far! I did find one typo in the first chapter - "short brown eyes and hair tied into two braids" (didn't leave a comment about it so if you decide to fix it it won't be mentioned there haha). More importantly, you do a great job of building a lot of emotional depth early, and the world building is interesting. Having the old grandpa's storytelling as a way to give exposition was a nice approach. I do think you could adjust the pacing to let some of those ideas shine more - you have a ton of potential here! Keep it up!
And @Branking , you have fantastic imagery and a really interesting concept. Your first chapter was engaging too. I think there's some work you can do grammatically to make things a bit more clear, but I found it really interesting!
You can find my active novel here if you are interested in taking a look at an episode or two and sharing your own perspective, constructive criticism is always welcome. Its fantasy / romance fantasy, all slow burn and focused more on character growth if that's up your alley at all 
