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My guilty conscience was not important right now.
New chapter posted this morning! We dive deeper into the complexity of our MC's powers and her position in the temple as she, Rhiannon, and Erik decide how to navigate their new alliance. You can start from the beginning here:
Sounds good to me! Happy to pause for a while
One last call for responses before I end this round 
Thank you @vieveda, that was a fun narrative! Here are the new doors, inspiration from your words and Lewis Carroll: After falling down a rabbit hole and drinking from a bottle labeled 'drink me', you find yourself shrunk down to six inches tall in a circular room filled with toys. Looking arou…
I'll take option 1 @vieveda ! scary tho... Life got bad but I have returned to this game now and i am excited about it lol
It is definitely hard to communicate things like that through writing, especially to show and not tell! I think you are doing a great job. And I appreciate that you are working to communicate Kaysi's uncertainty / shyness that way, I think that can be effective and will probably shine through much m…
subbed! good luck with your novel
finally got around to doing another character sketch; this is rhiannon. Wanted to draw her doing something she enjoys [image]
Always happy to check out new work! Subbed, good luck with writing! If you are interested, you can find one of my novels here
Lionne in The Fake Saintess Doesn't Want to Save the World (yet to be introduced in uploaded chapters) would be facing charges for lèse-majesté and probably also assault and maybe treason (just for cursing and throwing a punch or something to that effect, but still). Not canon tho - at least as of n…
I like your concept! I've found the stories in the episodes youve posted so far to be almost soothing to read. If you are interested, you can find one of my novels here
Already subbed and enjoying your story! Good luck as you keep writing If you are interested, you can find mine here! (no obligation to of course!!)
hmmm ill do the opposite of my actual personality and boldly choose door 3 lol
awesome yes, here are a some I enjoy that deserve more love!! by no means an exhaustive list ofc novels: comics:
already subbed, but good luck!! I'm looking forward to seeing how your story develops in the future
Here is a novel of mine The Fake Saintess Doesn't Want to Save the World. Its RoFan with no love triangles or anything like that, and it has none of the elements you mentioned in your post. My goal was to focus on character development and the whole save-the-world imperative they are dealing with, a…
subbed, looking forward to future uploads!
thanks for making this thread! I've read some of your work so far and subbed, good luck as you keep writing!!
one of mine is here if you have the time to check it out
i like this topic for a thread! I just read what you have posted so far (love it!), and its interesting to read it knowing about your ideas for cherry as for me, there's a few, but the biggest one is the MC's father. i originally planned to include him at some point, she was abandoned to the templ…
Already subbed to your stories, good luck with your goals and keep up the good work! Mine is here if you have any interest
A dagger!! 
oh dear. I can only hope she failed to hide what she did to me and was caught before she hurt anyone else!!
love the narrative you built haha
Just started reading and I like your work, @fluximmersion! Subbed and on my reading list going forward! If you are interested, you can find my work here! Always welcome new readers and feedback:
I'll take door 1, @vieveda !
Thank you so much!! This is all incredibly helpful, particularly your note on character voice! I really appreciate you taking the time to put together such a thoughtful review. Have a wonderful week!
Congrats on approaching this milestone! I've made it halfway through so far and I'm gonna read the rest, wonderful work!
oh but I liked yours too!! having one word inspire each door was very conceptual and cool! my favorite thing about this kinda thing is seeing how people reinterpret things as we go back and forth gonna go eat another tangerine now because all the tangerine talk has me craving more haha, I'll give …
Already subbed, but wishing you all the best! Happy early birthday!
I've read the beginning and definitely added this to my TBR list! Left some of my thoughts as comments. Keep it up!
My active novel is here if you are at all interested
Ok here's my review @Krysteena im so sorry for the delay! I've gone through your first ten episodes so far: I really like your first chapter! The pacing of your opening and the active set up for the intro is really great. The childhood games were described well and had something nostalgic to them…