This thread was open to comic creators, not novelists. That's reasonable given how it takes longer to read a novel chapter than to read a typical comic page. Novelists exchanging comments with each other, however, is a fair and feasible thing. I tend to leave feedback when I some prose anyway, so it would not be much more effort for me to commit to a requested comment.
Is any other novel writer (or poet for that matter) wanting to give this a try?