The Official "How Does This Look?!?" Thread

mayday 2016-10-15 00:51:46 UTC #170

This looks super cool. If I were to say one thing, the hooded blue character in the back is a VERY similar color to the background, and they don't stand out enough

Kurokoi 2016-10-15 09:45:39 UTC #171

Thank you! You do have a point. Hmm, I may just replace the character with someone else considering the direction my drafts are going.

CelestialNavigator 2016-10-15 12:56:57 UTC #172

This question will plague me forever:
Platinum, lilac and white

OR
Black, gold and blue?

Currently I have p-l-w but then i found this one and now I have doubts...

mac 2016-10-31 10:02:38 UTC #175

the first one looks nicer, i think

Doubtcent 2016-10-31 15:05:35 UTC #176

The second one has a more "Classical literature" type look. Very iconic.

CelestialNavigator 2016-11-06 16:38:29 UTC #177

@Zephyll Okay,

@vincentprendick Interesting observation

Well, I can use both covers because why not.

mac 2016-11-13 23:08:50 UTC #178

???? wondering if this hand placement looks totally wack?? yes? no?? maybe so?

monotone_ink 2016-11-14 01:31:52 UTC #179

Starting up new comic and was working on the cover:

Are the colour choices decent? Is it impactful, or is there something I could fix up?

Any other general tips are appreciated

Ayomekum 2016-11-26 06:30:36 UTC #180

it kinda looks a lil awkwardly tilted, but it wouldn't be especially noticeable in the larger image

ezpeen 2016-12-07 18:41:42 UTC #181

First one if you're going for a youunger audience, second one if you're going for the average consumer. Personally I like both, but prefer the second one.

deasertrats31 2016-12-11 06:24:49 UTC #182

Hello there!

wander_creature 2016-12-24 11:42:27 UTC #183

Hey guys! I just started a comic called Outer Spaces! What do you think?

Panda007 2016-12-26 21:53:42 UTC #184

Hello! I just posted the most recent page of my comic Of Fairies And Ghosts.

I'm really proud of it, and I wanted to hear some feedback. Here is the link.
I tried posting it here but I couldn't.

wander_creature 2016-12-27 10:31:02 UTC #186

I really love your style. It's simple, but captures the spirit and mystery of a grand adventure. Would definitely read more!

almondjoy445 2016-12-28 02:27:16 UTC #187

gosunkgugi 2016-12-31 20:49:47 UTC #188

I've been considering starting a webcomic, and I'm working on the cover page. What I'd like to get an opinion of, is whether it's obvious that the rightmost eye in this image is supposed to be from a skull.
Image 1

And if not, please tell me if this is better:
Image 2

aaronmp123 2017-01-04 04:19:05 UTC #189

I only have 3 pages so I hope you do not mind
https://tapastic.com/episode/555442

monotone_ink 2017-01-08 16:54:04 UTC #190

I'm working on a one-shot and I'm doing the drawing fully on digital. I realized after comparisons with my traditional work that the digital page is:
1. A bit more painful to look at
2. Doesn't seem to have as much impact/visual flow than the traditional.
Could someone point out why the traditional page seems better?

(Digital)

(Traditional)

torgerhara 2017-01-14 05:51:22 UTC #191

I just bought a tablet a few days ago, and i am still trying to figure out how to post my art. I wanted to know if my style is any good? Im also thinking about starting a comic.

Shanny8 2017-01-15 20:44:39 UTC #192

@monotone_ink to me it's just a case where I think you're used to doing traditional more than working fully digital. I'm the same way- when I ink traditionally my lines are more solid and I can get really fine/sharp points that I like. With digital, I'm still struggling with control, where all my lines dont come out exactly the way I would like- but right now digital is saving me a ton of time, process, & money on art supplies.

In time your digital work will get to the level that you like, you just gotta be patient & persistent with it.