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Oct 2022

Figured I'd post up the rendered version of the sketch from last night.

Definite improvement, but oddly the biggest area I think you need to work on is limbs and breasts. You have a case of 'anime boobs', even if they're more average in size. Breasts have weight to them, no matter what sort of thing is holding them up, and it should show even in this sort of art style. You have more detail to cleavage and things like that, but they're oddly circular. Breasts are tear-shaped, not circles. Proko actually has an excellent video on drawing breasts so I'd check him out. Just look it up on youtube.

Edit: Not sure if I'm allowed to link the video since the thumbnail has nipples, but it seems to be appropriate for youtube so I'll risk it: