@MerrowBros I don't think I've mentioned this, but I am kind of in love with your style. Love the strong shapes throughout.
@wispysing I love love love the reflection of the electricity in his eyes.... and the crackling speech bubble, aah!
I'm having an existential crisis and trying to figure out what feels "natural" for me to draw. Kids, don't try and have multiple styles to draw in because you end up real confused as to what actually feels normal. I drew a stumpier Sullivan to see if I wanted to make the style more deformed.
I uh. I don't know. It works I guess? I don't know what I want?! ~cartoons~
I also wrote a page-by-page outline for Chapter 1 w/ first draft of the dialogue, and wrote a detailed (but dialogue-less) outline of chapter 2. I think I need to do something about my tendency to treat the dialogue as a separate bit of writing because I feel like it's not doing me any favors.