Trying some things on this one. Like adding a white border to the panels (it isn't as quick as I thought, but its quite easy once I thought about it); Also played with some buildings for the background -also, did you know that the little house on top of buildings are called bulkheads? and that they are pretty hard to find 3D models, so I did my own on sketchup; The last panel I tried to don't think much and just do what I see on western comic, and I think I advanced a bit? I will see if I can go into that direction for my next page redo.
Original page was Young All-Stars v1 #8, page 08.