Hm, I don't think I understand what you mean by "fantasy based"? Is your boyfriend fictional, maybe? Or are you saying any fantasy could sweep you away?
Also, that's fine to want to get the game out-- but the game is out now! So, that's the perfect time to work on the presentation of the page. ^u^ It's never too late to give a game an update and I really do think if you worked on the pages just slightly more (and upgraded your text to something readable) you'd be able to get more folks checking it out!
Not trying to be rude, just trying to share what's worked for me so you can get ahead!