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Oct 2017

Have you ever have those moments or decisions where you want to add something in your world, as your story progresses but wouldn't make sense.

For veterans; have you ever forgotten what you wanted to put in your story, and just decided to throw stuff in there. Cough tite kubo with his bleach story.

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Yes to the first question. Some ideas for jokes i had were too dark for my comic. It also happened that i want to explain some things about the setting, but still is not the right time or don`t know for now how to do it in an entertaining and natural way.
So i am waiting for the right time for some scenes, and for others i am still thinking how to write them.

I’ve experienced both before. When you just add things, it’s makes the world building more engrossing. Most of the time.

I once wanted to place a complete psychopath in a light heart and happy comic =P
I was gonna introduce him by him torturing some animals, stitching stones inside their bodies

don't ask man I don't know

Lmao yes XD I wanted to add an extra character and realized they didnt belong there. And then there's the times when I fucked up and forget to put some shit in my story and Im like damn I messed up god why This is why I have multiple series XD

Won't call myself a veteran, but yes, I do forget some details on the 'rules' I set up for the story world for Pandora's Scar1. So whenever an expository bit comes up, I refer back to previous expositions to keep things consistent. Keeping notes (in a place where you can still find them a few months/year down the road : P ) helps too.

My main thing is that I have a bunch of ideas that I want to incorporate into my strip, but I feel like what's already established in the strip hasn't been fleshed out enough to warrant new ideas. So I just have to keep my ideas on the back-burner while I flesh out the strip as it is.

For example, there's a genie character (of sorts) that I wanted to add into Tommy Negi's universe, but I held back because I felt like I had a bunch of characters I still needed to flesh out before I could add him. I'll probably have to wait until year two of the strip to introduce him given how things are going.

I love how what started as a simple little side project done for fun has become a test of my patience in so many ways.

My main problem: I don't plan anything.
Honestly. I just write whatever comes into my head, read a few chapters back so stuff wouldn't go over the place, and generally, my writing process is just one big clusterf**k.
Good thing I use a notebook...those margins really DO come in handy. Just a tip!
-Helioxiv

Do a lot of pre-writing so there usually isn't a lot of first-draft content that needs to be cut. Sometimes I trim the dialogue or simplify the action but most passages survive.

I did cut a scene where one character seduces another. Both acted in character but the tone was too rom-com for my dark epic fantasy.

I've once randomly added a character who was meant to fill a minor plot-hole and she ended up being paramount to the overarching story... Fun times.

Something similar happened to me too - some of my minor characters became the most memorable ones and fan favorites.

Answering the first question - yes.
It mostly happens when I find myself facing a crossroad, when I have two ideas on how to solve a conflict/push the story forward, but I have to pick only one. It's so hard to choose when both are equally good, just from a different approach that doesn't have a crucial impact on the further chapters - either character A handles the situation like a badass, or character B handles it in their own unique way, etc.
So I have to pick one and ditch the other.

That's why I plan to make my stories into choose your own adventure stories or Visual Novels one day. I can keep both ideas, and let the reader decide which one they like more X3

As for the second, it happens too. I totally forget parts of the dialogue... and it pisses me off, because in the back of my head I remember it was perfect. I get the angrier when I can't find the notes with the important conversation in, and I have to either remember it again or come up with something else (but I don't like the new idea as much).

I once set up a time travel arc in a story that was more epic fantasy... it was an awkward mesh, so much that I have to rethink about the whole story... Also I tried to push this bard training sub-arc, and this jealousy arc that came with it, which was not important and just added unnecessary drama that goes nowhere...

No wonder I rebooted .-.

To solve the first problem I usually work on more than one story idea. Even though I'm working on a webcomic right now, I'm already planning the next three. That way it's easier to use whatever crazy cool idea my mind comes up with.

To avoid the second problem I usually write down the way the story will progress. All of it. It's an outline, but VERY brief. I just want to know what the story is about. Of course, as I'm writing the details the story changes, but at least I have the "skeleton" of the story already sketched.

Well. Good morning forums.

Those are some really fun characters to write, especially if you put them in charge of the sarcasm.

@ joe_galindez
I like them best when they seem to enjoy their madness, like deadpool or greed from FMA, their crazy grins always bring a smile to my face XD

@DiegoPalacios
thanks man, , I did finally find him a place in the story, though more of and antagonist/third party and not so blood crazy and more happy crazy, no more small animals being mutilated sadly :C

I have honestly felt that, but I often thing if it'll make sense with the setting or the overall characters and sometimes it'll work but a lot of the time it won't.