just updated and would love feedback on how to make it a better Novel.
Nice Little description for the book that doesn't spoil to much.
In the heart of the barren Martian landscape lies a mystery shrouded in darkness. Atlas, a seasoned special ops agent, Accompanying a scout team on a mission to uncover the truth behind a vanished colony. But as they breach the eerie silence of the deserted outpost, they stumble upon a colossal artifact beyond their wildest imagination.
Suddenly, they find themselves ripped from the red sands of Mars and hurled into the unknown world full of wonders, magic, and horrors beyond their wildest imaginations