Hi and thank you, you really helped me out. I know it feels like an information dump [ well it kinda is] the Narrator is in fact telling you everything,and she a very sassy and bright girl, you will soon meet her. I've always felt it was just full of information that could easily lose my readers interest, thank you for telling me that. It may seem as though she telling you every thing that has happened, but that's more of the basic. She is telling this while she is on her way to a very important turning point. There will be more information on the young man who seem to bug her quite a bit. And little bit more into the organization of W.U.T.F. In many ways the are two protagonists, one being the leaders of the world the other being the Towers. Sadly by the time I read this I had already published part three. Now that I'm thinking about it you have until chapter two, to meet the narrator. E'm starting to regret a little bit. This is my third time rewriting the story so made I'll introduce her a little early. But more importantly I'm grateful for the advice and the videos I'll definitely check it out. Hope you have a great weekend 
This really helped me.
