Want lengthy feedback? Look no further (5/5) CLOSED

[bigtreebigworld]

Hey there! Before starting to make my own comic I was mainly helping friends with their writing or critiquing their art and I must admit, I really miss it. In order to get back into it and also give back to a very supportive community, I'm offering to help you!
I am quite particular and critical in all artistic aspects and I like to do things in-depth, so if you want a genuine review of your work, you're in the right place. Here's what I have to offer:

• A detailed review of your entire work or of selected chapters, including a clear list of pros and cons
• A description of what I liked and/or what I think your target audience might like/dislike
• A few recommendations and general advice, not solely criticism

Yes, you can ask me to read your entire novel/comic, or just specify a set of chapters you particularly need feedback for; I am dedicated to helping as much as I can which is why I'm offering this and keeping it limited! And no matter how much you ask for, don't worry: I'm a fast reader and I will get you your review (by PM or whichever way you prefer) within a reasonable delay.

That's it, I hope this helps :))

[ivanskilling]

I'm always up for feedback! And thank you so much for offering to do this.

I have 3 novels, but it's up to you which one you want to review. I'm fine with anything!

(Latest novel)
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Psychological Thriller
Unravel the secrets and mysteries hidden in a small town through the eyes of a singer, a policeman, and a school counselor. Clues to the subsequent murders are hidden in human relationships of the past and the dark abyss of the Internet!

Devil's Triangle | Tapas

(Completed novel)
Genre: Historical Romance, Fantasy
Follow Empress Wu Zetian's treacherous journey from the hands of enemy Tufan soldiers back to the Forbidden City where she battles foes from within her own kingdom.

Shackles | Tapas

Genre: Scifi, Action, Thriller
A short story collection that involves science fiction, fast-paced action scenes, and dystopic universes.

Dark Bytes | Tapas

[miss.monocle]

Oh I love in depth feedback! I just have my one comic, Murphy's Law!
https://tapas.io/series/Murphys-Law-Official

[bigtreebigworld]

No problem! I'll go with your most recent novel, including the upload I saw was dropping tomorrow. I'll be in touch by PM later this week :))

[bigtreebigworld]

Alright, I'll check it out and be in touch by PM later this week!

[miss.monocle]

Sounds good! Take all the time you need for it

[rifftiff]

I don't have a long series yet, but it's light reading meant for anyone, though I suppose those interested in Korean culture are a little more likely to read it.
I would love some feedback on overall story, and episode flows. I know the art style still needs work, I'm improving as I go with that one.

Bbangbab: Bread & Rice | Tapas

[Inspector_Spinda]

Plastic Teeth | Tapas

Mine is pretty short so far. I hope you'll be harsh. I haven't gotten too many comments yet or much of a following so any bit of help would be great!

[bigtreebigworld]

Well I'm already interested in Korean culture, so I think this'll be right up my alley. I took note on the specific points you mentioned, I'll be in touch by PM in the week :))

[bigtreebigworld]

If you want harsh, that's what I'll give you! I'll be in touch with my comments this week.

[ivanskilling]

Thank you very much!
And take your time. I'm looking forward to hearing your feedback!

[flowershop]

Hello! I would love to receive feedback on my BL comic about Kpop idols. Here are links to my comic:

My Idle Idols (BL)

My Idle Idols | Tapas

I would be so grateful if you could review the entire thing, but I understand if you are busy or not interested in this particular comic! Thank you for doing this anyway though~

[bigtreebigworld]

You're in luck, I'm actually into kpop and BL. I'll look at the whole thing and be in touch this week!

[flowershop]

Yay!! Thank you so much! I'm super excited!