Youtube:
As far as your video goes, annunciation and lighting seem to be the weakest aspect. Because you don't enunciate I had a hard time understanding some words you were trying to say, you also either speed up your dialogue or start talking really slowly at some points. Lighting was another issue I noticed, somewhere in the middle it got really dark and hard to notice what you were drawing. Audio also needs work, but I can understand if that's due to budget. Seeing as how you seem to be a fan of the Odd1'sOut I would look into how he does his set up from the earlier days. I believe he did it in the closet and jerry rigged the closet to be soundproof. I didn't watch the other video.
Your comic:
I'm not going to comment on art, but one thing that I will mention, you need to work on spelling. I don't know where your from, but a lot of the words in your comic pages have distracting spelling errors. poisen, Valintines, whn (but I don't know if that is a comment on internet writing), were instead of where. I know it seems minor, but it can be extremely distracting. Also with a comic as simple (not trying to imply it's bad) perhaps you can take the extra effort to color cause the white black and white colors on a computer screen or cell phone can be a little straining on the eye.
Giving out critique is the only way I can think of that can currently help you out in both of your fields. I know you're only just starting out, and I don't want you to feel discouraged just because I make these comments. Who knows there's plenty of people out there and perhaps you'll find the audience that's right for you. Hopefully you take these to notes and use them to help you out with your work.
Also thank you for the drawing, it's quite charming.
Note: I do post links to peoples pages who take the time to draw my characters on my Twitter account so I don't mind spreading your comic and youtube video through there.