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Foreshadowing is a wonderful plot device. It could be a necklace, a jar or even a cake! Maybe that cake shows up again at the end climax and has a color associated with violence (red), which just so happens to be the villains main color scheme? It could just be in the background. Haha, there's my best example! Or even one sentence that shouldn't be read into, but it's a lot more than it seems.

I'd love to appreciate these small details in your writings! Share em'!

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I have one that happened accidentally. When I originally designed my cast, I based it on the standard cast stereotypes for American TV procedurals, types like the team leader, the parental figure/counselor, the femme fatale, the girl, the hot guy, the muscle, the family, the genius "twist" character, etc. My MC's protector would be her dad for the sole purpose of him being the exasperated dad of a bunch of kids. When I started making cuts to the cast list, I had one character I wasn't sure what to do with.

He is a former soldier with a law degree who was recruited to the team from the FBI. He had MAJOR "protector" vibes so he became the bodyguard and love interest to my MC. Making the switch opened up a major vein of world-building and hit on my theme of history repeating itself.

There's a lot of stuff that comes off as otherwise pretty innocuous, I guess one that's not really a spoiler is the fireball in the center of the logo:

There's one I put that very few people have caught. Early on in my comic there's these things called impastas, the only way to tell is by looking at their eye color. And the king just so happens to have that same color... Neat.

My novel is full of those small details that, once you notice them, turn into huge plot points. For example, it's mentioned in the first chapter that there's a person hiding behind a tree and it's never clearly shown who that person was but little details give it away at some point, making that character's story so much more relevant to the story.

Oh, foreshadowing is an interesting thing. Like there's in front cover a person witnessing a scene, which going to be a huge part later in the story. To be honest though I'm not sure how many people do connect the dots at first. Small details are very nice to add to any kind of story, like cherries on the top of the cake :slight_smile:

That is a secret I will not reveal until much later. All I will say is I leave my stories full of easter eggs full of future events. Once you read the story again or check the cover of my novels again you will see something new and kewl.

There's actually a whole lot of things in my project that will become more important than they seem right now. Although, I admit that I might need to learn a little more to better foreshadow things (which is what I planned for when I ever get to remake the first chapters), I'm having a lot of fun to carefully place those details ^^"

Without getting into too many spoilers, some details that can be overlooked would be:

  • Books that Shadedancer reads
  • Josi's eyes that do a thing every now and then
  • A certain emblem and a crest, which were both only shown once until now

Just to name a few examples:
1) The connection between two characters is revealed at the end of chapter 4, but it's already hinted at in the background of a page in chapter 2 (not super obvious though due to the low detail of the drawing).

2) Maya using the office phone was important to the long version of my comic (not the short version though)

3) Annika's random comment when Maya returns home hints at her backstory.

I appreciate that so much! I love sprinkling stuff like that in all the time! I hope you enjoy.

I really like putting in little throwaway details which later become important. Here are a couple of (deliberately vague so as to avoid spoilers) examples in Elf Noir:

First, when Arq and his fellow enforcers go to the Bouncy Tart to try to solve a murder, they come up with multiple clues suggesting four different avenues of inquiry they could pursue. The one they choose leads to them uncovering the information necessary to solve the case, at least as to the immediate details of the murder.

Satisfied with the resolution of that matter, Arq devotes his time to another matter - i.e. the main plot of vengeance.

He won't find out til much later that one or more of the other avenues of inquiry would also have produced useful and important information about the murder.

Second, there are multiple references to Arq being lucky casually slipped into the narrative. The cynical might suspect it's a backhanded recognition of his "plot armor" 🤣🤣 but it's possible that it might actually be something more

A couple of commenters have noted little bits of foreshadowing I put in, which makes me so happy, and when the foreshadowing comes to fruition, they are definitely getting a shoutout in the comments!.

Sooo spoilers here.

In God of Gears I mention the Starfolks King in the ancient memory Silas observes... There's something important with that king. (even though he's just mentioned once right now...) There's also the briefest mention about how old Silas' soul is and what Lucifer had to do for Silas to be born... That's all I'm saying for now.

In Full Moon King an ancient being is mentioned "The Snake" he's super important... You won't connect all the dots about where he is unless you pay attention. There have been a few major hints, but you won't catch them if you don't read closely. More hints will be dropped as it goes on.

  • scars, very blatant I know. There isn't alot of question to why they have them as their workplace is just filled with acid and stabby people and stabby people on acid dunked in acid, but Rahat and Qamars are plot relevant while Alya and Najms are just flavour.
  • benzodiazipine, or just general drug use, it does say it on the bottle but I wouldn't begrudge someone missing it, theres a lot of bottles around.
  • Alya's purple coin. It's a library token and it's important for their backstory.

That. Is. So. Clever!! I love this, especially the first one. It would be like a--Wait! Go back moment! REWIND IT AHHHHH

(Also I love your illustration style)

The Ghoul has a few hidden in plain sight. To mention one, the main character, Julian, has a "line" on his neck where the child in the prologue got stabbed