What are the strengths of your story?

axelruler 2024-10-02 17:05:25 UTC #21

Mine is also a rollercoaster of emotions; one moment there is terror and tension, the next moment there are bad jokes and questionable humor

Leyelle 2024-10-02 17:16:56 UTC #22

The narration. I have a poetry inspired lyrical prose type way of setting the scenes and narrating the story that really creates a colorful world that you can almost feel and experience with all your senses. Second is the characters, they are very real, emotional, and all complex, like they could be real people with multiple dynamics and dimensions you get to see more more over time

Probably the lore, mystery, and world building. The history is complex, and it playfully mixes what's real with what might be fairy tale or the leads imagination to throw readers for a curve. It's sort of a mystery, and people are left to discover what, if anything, is really as it seems.

axelruler 2024-10-02 17:50:01 UTC #23

wooowww very good!!.

sophialyncoleman 2024-10-02 18:22:03 UTC #24

AH love threads like these!
I’d say the aspect of my story (so far) that stands out to readers is my use of expressions. I love illustrating expressions and I don’t hold back on this story!

My personal favorite aspect is how I believe mental health ties into the concept of magic and fantasy. It’s a conversation I’ve always wanted to discuss and now it’s ALL I GET TO TALK ABOUT HAHAHAHA

Also Lee

Lee’s becoming a fan favorite- all the homies love Lee

sophialyncoleman 2024-10-02 18:25:54 UTC #25

SUBBED! I’m excited to read🫢

danieligwd3 2024-10-02 18:52:10 UTC #26

Thank you for the advice I will do so

danieligwd3 2024-10-02 18:58:06 UTC #27

I have currently written 24 and published/scheduled 21 .

axelruler 2024-10-02 20:26:35 UTC #28

Thank you very much!

axelruler 2024-10-02 20:27:36 UTC #29

wow, that's enough to take a good vacation

danieligwd3 2024-10-02 20:28:54 UTC #30

I intend to write at least 300 chapters

axelruler 2024-10-02 20:36:34 UTC #31

Hmm, I would say that's excellent, and I do something similar: since my story is in novel format, most of the time I prefer to use action tags instead of speech tags, I think that gives it an extra charm.

To me, it doesn't make sense to write something like:
Someone said: "I'm so happy!"
And then, they smiled.

If I can write:
Someone gave a big smile: "I'm very happy!"

axelruler 2024-10-02 22:41:09 UTC #32

I wish you lots of patience and good humor!

finleydeandre 2024-10-03 05:22:45 UTC #33

I'd say the strength of my story is definitely my writing and while the artwork is simple it gets stronger as the story progresses.

Have a daily comic strip called The Experiment check it out, subscribe let me know if you like it or if you don't either way is cool with me. The Experiment

arcaneer99 2024-10-03 07:15:58 UTC #34

Greeting!

I've heard from many that the worldbuilding in War of Neytives is the best strength when I write. My story blends Science and Fantasy genres. I wanted to layer both genres into the characters, plotlines and lore as best as I can, without piling everything into a certain part of the story. I wanted everything to flow naturally and keep readers hooked.

This story follows an ensemble of extraterrestrials as they journey through the galaxy and unknowingly discover a dangerous prophecy. The 16th chapter has been posted and will continue it's weekly updates every Wednesday.

axelruler 2024-10-04 11:25:27 UTC #35

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AmysGames 2024-10-04 17:42:57 UTC #36

Niji Chikara is a magical girl comic where the magical shenanigans have real world consequences. The girls still have to do homework, plan around conflicting schedules, and deal with clashing personalities as they battle dangerous villains—who, by the way, also have to plan around their own work schedules.

It balances comedy and drama, with a compelling cast of characters who will make you laugh and make you cry. Enjoy a lighthearted narrative with dark undertones, which will make you realize that being a magical girl isn't always fun and games.

If that sounds interesting to you, feel free to check it out:

irr11tauthor 2024-10-04 18:25:55 UTC #37

I like to think the humor. My co-writer and I have a shared braincell and our senses of humor are right in line, so it adds up to a lot of entertaining chaos

axelruler 2024-10-04 20:03:31 UTC #38

That's great, having another person working on the project adds a lot!!

irr11tauthor 2024-10-05 00:04:47 UTC #39

I didn't know how it would work when we started but it's been phenomenal! It's like having your biggest fan writing your story with you.

axelruler 2024-10-05 18:32:51 UTC #40

I imagine, and I also imagine that with a different perspective acting on the same purpose, several ideas and possibilities arise.