This thread had a bunch of detailed responses.
You address the previous feedback and concerns?
If you did then you should know how much (more) improved it is.
You're starting this thread as if this comic is brand new.
That part makes it sound like you're looking for early feedback.
If you add-on to your older thread and no one jumps back- to read it again.....
then I think you should include some artwork as a sample of what you've changed.
I think that would go further than guys read some more...
And I actually find it rude (maybe that's too strong a word- maybe discouraging fits better) that all those readers/artists (including me) took the time to check out your work and give you detailed responses and you don't offer a single thank you or acknowledgement of that time spent - other people's time invested in your book to make it better.
Not even an agree/disagree or I'll look into that- none of those canned responses...
So you basically ignore the previous responses and you're here, again, wanting a one-way street.
I can almost guarantee EVERYONE that posted last time would check your progress if you at least gave a nod for their efforts.