What is confusing in this short comic?

[lizardlullabye]

I made a short comic for the "last train".

Unfortunately, I skipped explaining much in the story and drew "possibly" dwarves.
This may cause confusion.

Please let me know what is confusing in my comic below.
Panels, sentences, drawings, characters, anything, etc. Thanks.

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[UnTalAugustus]

I did not find the comic confusing, personally. One can perfectly infer what's going on by paying attention. Very efficient writing!
I really liked it!

[justincarbunkle]

I would've liked an establishing shot at the start of episode 5 to make it clear Munin and the people he went with are in a new location/might find Aya there. Starting it with Munin blowing the whistle right off episode 4, I wasn't really sure the time/place we were at.

Took a second read to really grasp what was going on, but the pieces all seem to be there. Don't know what to change without completely changing the story.

Cute art style btw. Nice job.

[lizardlullabye]

Thanks for the feedback.

It was just something I suspect would be confusing, because I just carried on with the story without telling the audience whatever background-setting stuff that might be helpful. Glad you like the story!

[lizardlullabye]

Thanks for the feedback.

Ok, I can see how that transition is a bit messy. I will take more care next time when the story changes time and place -- for the next comic whenever I make it!