Okay, so I've just read through the first chapter and ticked the boxes that I thought were best. I have some follow up questions:
- Do you have a regular posting schedule? Do you stick to it?
- You said you post on twitter but I don't see a link to your twitter on your tapas page. Have I missed it? I personally find twitter to be one of my most valuable places for feedback.
Now I'm happy to expand on why I voted for each section.
Text Font
Super clear, I think that's great and a good fit with your art style. One thing that isn't consistent is your line spacing. Example, P13, last panel. One bubble has a lot of space between the lines, and another not as much.
Art
I went for the middle ground. Your characters are cute, and there is definitely personality to them. I would say the improvement needs to come from the backgrounds. I struggle with this myself, so I don't have all the answers here. One thing I think would help though, is the colouring. Let's give an example; your art reminds me a little of Fairly Odd Parents! Here's a screengrab from Timmy's room:
Notice how blue everything is, with minimal detail. Also, notice how the lines are all in colour. This helps the characters stand out against it. Another location:
Again clean, and coloured lines. I'd recommend testing the waters and seeing how you like it with your art. Even just a hint of a background in the smaller panels can really make the scene come alive! Such as a wall:
Or the floor:
Pacing
Seems great, keep it up!
Comedy
So far so good! Genuinely entertained
Drama and characters
Your main character is very charming and it pushes me on the read more.
Presentation
Sometimes I was a little confused about which bubble to read first, but overall it was pretty clear.
Colours
Addressed in the art section
I really think you have some good work. Keep pushing, keep creating, and keep working that social media! I would recommend expanding where you advertise. Do you use Reddit? Discord? Do you talk with other comic creators? Perhaps even youtube trailers! Your comic on Tapas appears to be less than a year old, so there is definitely something to be said for patience
I hope some of this was helpful to you!