Hi!! Welcome to Tapas! Hope we can be friends
My comic is titled RedZone-137 and it is about a group of friends inside a nuclear shelter. I started this last year, but ironically, I think it kind of reflects what's happening right now
Also, it can be read in any order and I was learning digital art as I was making it so I apologize if the first chapters don't look as well as the most recent ones.
I hope you like it and I am open to any kind of criticism or advice.
Thank you so much in advance!!
@IndigoShirtProd Wow! You have a really developed and unique style! Your comic has a really nice flow to it and the way you render it makes it look really polished and professional. It prompts feelings of nostalgia in me for cartoons like Jackie Chan Adventures or Shaolin Showdown. Please keep up the great work! I'm sorry I cannot offer you any constructive criticism on this.
@dragonsparking I like the new art style that you are using for the more recent work on this. In the older chapters the font that you had been using was extremely cool but very hard to read and it distracted from the content of your comic. Just as a personal preference I would love to see you continue to develop the new artwork style that you're using, it looks great but lacks a little bit of the flair you had in the previous style you were using that made it unique. Keep up the excellent work!
@elisabatla Your work is very sweet, Beni and Lulu are so cute- especially in the way that they emote! It would be wonderful to learn more about the world they live in. The style you have is lovely and loose, that is something I really appreciate. It would be nice if there was a little more contrast between the line art and your shading, it would really make things stand out and add contrast and emphasis. Please keep up the good work!
@WhiskeyClone Don't be discouraged! Your work hasn't been out there very long, sometimes it can take a while for things to pick up steam but you'll get more subscribers the longer you keep at it! A way you might be able to make your comic attract more people could be to do your lettering digitally- it helps the text to be clear and consistent. Cropping out the areas of the image that aren't the comic would help place more emphasis on the artwork that you're clearly putting a lot of love and effort into. Keep up the great work!
@snackbagstudios Thank you for the welcome. Holy cannoli I am in love. I love DnD and I love this comic. The panels are so dynamic and full of gorgeous detail. I'm sorry, I have no critiques for this, it makes my eyes happy and it makes me want to improve as an artist and story teller. Grasping at straws, and this isn't even about the comic, is the summary. It doesn't match the tone of the work but I cannot place exactly why, but that certainly isn't a bad thing. Thanks for sharing this, and thanks for the moving work! I'm a fan,
Thank you sooo much @strange-omens!!! Makes us sooo happy!
We will take a look at the summery! Thanks again! <3
-Heidi
Hi! i hope you all are doing fine! i'm a very new creator and im also new in writing. i just uploaded my first light novel few days ago. i really need feedback to improve my novel. if you like a fantasy-adventure story, i hope you like it! i would appreciate for your critics comments.
thankyou so much !
If you like short episodes but lots of content then Why Not check out my comic TLC ?
The comic is about a young girl that gets kicked out of an orphanage for her unpredictable powers and ends up getting taken in by a shapeshifter into a mish-mashed adopted family. she has to learn what it means to be herself, be part of a family, and uncover whatever the family's butler is hiding before its too late!
The comic has got aspects of modern fantasy, mystery, found family, and slice of life (as well as tiny bits of science fiction but thats far from the main focus). I'd probably rate it at PG-13 (specific Pages with PG-13 content are flagged as such in the episode tittles as well)
What I got? A lot, that's what I got: Hope you enjoy, I've got a little something for everyone.
Genre: High Fantasy Medical Drama
Genre: High Fantasy Graphic Horror
Genre: High Fantasy LGBT Romance
Genre: Low Fantasy Magic College Slice of Life +POC LGBT MC
Genre: Low Fantasy Dark Comedy/Drama
Genre: Science Fiction Futurism Romantic Drama
Hi!
I'm new here too.
I'd love to get some feedback on my work. It's a novel, though. See if it interests you.
https://tapas.io/series/Diaries-of-a-Fighter
Title: Diaries of a Fighter
Genre: thriller with supernatural elements/ romance/ it’s also a bit dark…
Summary: A troubled, wanna-be professional MMA fighter ventures into the dark and occasionally bizarre world of Japanese fighting organisations to become the best fighter in the world. He encounters love, hate, brutality, some suspicious, other-worldly beings, and is faced with hard decisions. The life of a fighter is certainly not an easy one, but then again, nothing worth fighting for is easy.
Thank you!