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Thank you! I left you my comments and a longer review below the chapters. I enjoyed reading your book so far. I think it has a great potential and hopefully more people will get to know it and read it.
Hi! I'm up for it...how many chapters to review you had in mind? My story is semi-dark I'd say...has violence but it's not the main focus, also there are some darkish things inside.... see if you find it interesting enough and we can do some swaps...
Hi! Nice topic! 
Here is my novel:
Hi! It's a thriller/action/romance with supernatural elements, has strong and intriguing characters and takes place in Japan although the main character is not Japanese. Read through the thoughts and adventures of a foreign fighter that tries to make it big in Japan and find his place an shadowy fig…
Hi! I'd love some feedback on mine: Thank you!
"When you stare into the abyss, the abyss stares right back at you, K once said to me. I asked her what the stare of the abyss was like, but she never answered, and I didn’t think about it further. Until now."
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It's a thriller with subtle supernatural elements and with some dark romance. If you like well developed and unusual characters, Japan and you're up for some action this might be a good story for you.
Hi! This is mine - a thriller with subtle supernatural elements and romance!
Hi! A thriller with supernatural elements and dark romance. Takes place in Japan!
Hi! Link of the story: https://tapas.io/series/Diaries-of-a-Fighter/info Genre: thriller (with subtle supernatural elements and romance) How many chapter I should read: 10 Explain why you need help with your story: want to see if it the story grips the reader, if it reads smoothly, if characters …
Hi! I'm hoping to reach the first 25! Lets help each other!
“Somebody didn’t sleep in his bed last night. I presume you got along well with your guest?”
Hi! I'm older than 25 and I guess it should reflect in my writing too. I'm writing a novel, a thriller (with subtle supernatural elements and some dark romance), that takes place in Japan. It's going to be a longer work, with well developed characters and plot. All characters are adults. Maybe yo…
Here is mine! Hope somebody gives it a try and reads it!
In same place as you....still to hit the first 25.... Here is mine:
Oh Yeah! Go novelists! 
Here is mine:
Hi! Thanks for this thread - I'd like to promote my novel: Diaries of a Fighter. A thriller that takes place in Japan, has some supernatural elements, and also there's some dark romance. Please take a look and let me know what you think about it. Any feedback will be much appreciated. Thank you!
Welcome! I'm quite new here as well...below is the link to my novel...
When you stare into the abyss, the abyss stares right back at you, K once said to me. I asked her what the stare of the abyss was like, but she never answered, and I didn’t think about it further. Until now. DIARIES OF A FIGHTER - thriller and dark romance
Hi! I've started posting my novel on this site not long ago and I don't have many subs yet. I'm promoting hoping more people will see it and hopefully read it. 11 chapters are uploaded so far. I'd be happy to receive some feedback and if you enjoy reading it, please subscribe and like it. The story …
Hi! I've started posting my novel on this site not long ago. 11 chapters are uploaded so far. I'd be happy to receive some feedback and if you enjoy reading it, please subscribe and like it. The story is for all those that like Japan and martial arts, strong characters and bits of supernatural... A …
Hi! Would you do a comment swap on the first chapters? I'm also offering a sub for sub. Let me know if interested. Thanks! This is my novel:
Hi! I read your first chapter and I subscribed. Nice first chapter, it attracts the reader. I'd appreciate if you take a look at my novel. It's also new, although it has more chapters. Thank you!
Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I like yours too...really nice art! I'll keep reading it. 
Hi! I checked out and subscribed to your series - it's really cool. Great drawings and it's very funny! I will continue reading it. I hope you check out mine (it's a novel). Thank you!
Hi! I'm interested in your proposal. I have an unfinished novel of cca 24.000 words. The genre is Sci-Fi thriller with some romance. The theme is post-apocalyptic/dystopian. Let me know if it sounds interesting for you and I can send you a summary and some chapters. I think it could work well as a g…
Hi! I'm interested. How many chapters are we talking about? Here is link to my novel: Let me know if you're interested. Thanks!
Great, thank you! Looking forward to read yours!