when it's going that "badly" then there's the presentation that you can play around with.
esp on webtoons people do click on stuff on the fresh page, so you can try new icons and changes to the description (get feedback from the forums. esp on the description. I'm sure it could be much snappier) and thumbnails for a month and just compare if anything changes.
it won't make you blow up. but getting more ppl to just click on it, would already be an improvement probably.
rn, I personally wouldn't click on it based on cover and description.. the cover has a bit of a "comic made with paint feel" (to me. not trying to throw shade, I just think any input rn could be helpful?)
but when I click on the episodes, the art is actually pretty neat!
so I dont see why this wouldn't get subs, esp if youve got 50 eps under the belt and been doing this for months.
another thing that might help is going back and combining the first few episodes into one longer one.
like. pages 1-15 would make a great first impression.
you have the setting with human and monster world.
you have the MC's job, his discontent with it, his morals when the kid is too young to be scared, and then the action scene with the robber and the punch.
which would be a great cliffhanger for the first episode. like "whaat did shadow guy just ... kill a man??"
and you will WANT to click the next episode to know the answer.
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ppl give things a shot for like... one to three episodes. if nothing keeps their attention, they often leave.
so making your first episode a bit of a feature length that has enough in it to hook someone, might get the numbers of ppl who stick around up
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actually, literally look at your views for this.
page 15 /ep7 is pretty much where your numbers start to become more consistent So if that's the first point that makes ppl want to stick around, then that's what the first episode should include
I hope I didn't overstep, since you didn't actually ask for feedback.
aynways, I'll sub (will have to catch up the rest of the pages later) and do my best to be engaging. for now, take the sub and the first few likes :3