Which logo is better?

powerplantanimations 2023-01-20 16:31:02 UTC #1

Okay so here's the original for reference:

And here's the ones we have in mind:

So the premise of the comic (for reference) is about this anime protag dying and being resurrected as a stick figure. We decided to try to ham it up and sell the fantasy aspects a little more by making the font more like the isekais you'd find. What do you peeps think?

cookieroach 2023-01-20 16:36:51 UTC #2

I prefer the middle one, but both of the new ones feels kinda similar so both would work and definitely an improvement! Nice work

harlan 2023-01-20 16:49:31 UTC #3

The second one is my favorite.

theyrebothakilogram 2023-01-20 17:05:41 UTC #4

I like the 3rd one, I like how the words are more sketchy

Kelheor 2023-01-20 17:33:21 UTC #5

I think the one in the middle /with new Stickfigure font/ is not that readable, honestly. And I do really like the old font, looks great for stickman comic.
I do like the golden letters on the last one, but the whole thing looks somewhat crammed IMO? Maybe it just needs a bit more paper space.

VersusVII 2023-01-20 18:26:40 UTC #6

I prefer the last one, the font suits better for the comic.

powerplantanimations 2023-01-20 19:21:07 UTC #7

Like making the torn paper a little bigger?

Kelheor 2023-01-20 19:23:20 UTC #8

Yeah, that. I don't know, maybe there are some other ways to do it better, but a bigger piece of paper will be a good start.

powerplantanimations 2023-01-20 19:51:58 UTC #9

How's this?:

(Before)

(After)

Kelheor 2023-01-20 20:00:58 UTC #10

Reads better already!
I wonder if it lacks something, but honestly, I am not good at this kind of stuff. Maybe making the piece of paper more uneven (like in the original), or maybe a couple of golden elements to support the golden text. Hopefully someone else will give you a better advice ^^

powerplantanimations 2023-01-20 20:02:42 UTC #11

Thanks so much! Will def be testing some of the stuff you mentioned out. I DO think the piece of paper can be a little more uneven (especially at the top).

powerplantanimations 2023-01-20 20:10:14 UTC #12

One more thing, but what did you mean by gold elements? Like do you mean it shining? (last question I promise)

Kelheor 2023-01-20 20:17:18 UTC #13

I mean like maybe a couple of stars/sparkes/roses...something like that if you go for a more shoujo approach like you know, some original prettified titles have

(Also, no problems!)

powerplantanimations 2023-01-20 20:42:01 UTC #14

Oooooh yeah you're RIGHT. Hopefully this'll match up with the cover. I REAAAALLY wanna look like those.

system 2023-02-19 20:42:03 UTC #15

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