You seem to be suffering from the same problem I have. You have difficulty giving a distorted camera of depth when you want to draw from a peculiar angle. Like:
The character looks disfigured, as if she has tiny legs and a huge head, instead of the camera looking from above his head.
I feel your pain, I cannot do that successfully as well.
You make amazing backgrounds - simple, yet very effective.
Can't say I was impressed by the writing, but I didn't read all that much.