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May 2022

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Your book cover reminded me of Rambo as a chicken. I don't know why but is intriguing nonentheless. I would give it a try just based on curiosity if anything else. That's for sure. What's your book about? I know I'm very late to this but I'll leave my book cover nonetheless. I case someone wants to give it a try and judge it.

It is a mystery-based comic about Chippo who is the last chicken in the world.
As far as he knows he may be the last one alive. )O_v_O(

Don't let the cute art style fool you!

As for your novel:

Will I click on it - I will take a look at the description first
What's my opinion - The title cathed my attention although the cover design isn't the type I like. Nothing is wrong with it, I just prefer the ones that are drawn rather than having more pictures combined into one ^^
The text is nice and visible and fits the theme.

If you have it on tapas do post a link to it :slight_smile:

That looks interesting, do you have a link to Chippo's story?

I don't have the story in Tapas. It's a self-published book that you can find anywhere books are sold. I have more reviews on amazon and goodreads than elsewhere. I don't know if I can publish it on Tapas without risking Amazon taking the book off their site. It's not on KDP, but I'm not sure if I'm allowed to post it elsewhere for free. I guess I could upload a few chapters here and redirect readers on the middle of the book if they want to read the rest?

Here is the link to mine: https://tapas.io/series/Eternal-mist

I'm not sure if you can, if its self published maybe you can :thinking:
You can definitely add few chapters/pages on tapas and redirect people. On Amazon people can read certain number of pages for free anyways * shrug*

As beautiful as they are I think I'd only pick up issue 7's cover, it stands out and it has me wondering what kind of story it is, while the other covers look like very basic action/sci-fi covers they're beautiful but expected. Your issue 7 is great and I would pick it up, then probably look at the others because of that.


this is my new cover

I'm glad you like it so far <3
Although mark spoilers please :3

I'll check your story someday soon ^^

Thanks.

ps I don't know how to mark spoilers :worried:

Summary

trying to mark spoilers

okay so, you press on the options on the upper toolbar while writing the messages here and then hide details :slight_smile:

Hi! I really like how your new, improved cover looks! You really listened to the critiques and made it so much better!
When I saw your cover for the first time I thought of a chick who decided to go on an adventure. I thought of one of those stories where a child decides to leave their home behind and go see the world. Honestly I wouldn't click on it because I feel like you still have a way to go when it comes to art but seeing how you improved your cover so quickly following the other people's advice, I think you have a lot of potential!

Also, your comic is a little similar to mine! Though, mine has a pink robin as a main character :sweat_smile:



I'm curious to see what you think of it!

Thank you :slight_smile:

Most people when they see the cover think is about adventure although it is bigger than that.

I chose this shot specifically because it is the biggest moment in his life when he got the courage to explore a bit into the mist. The story itself is very mysterious and we as a reader are exploring the world around Chippo together with him.
Don't let the cute artwork fool you. I made this cover 1 year ago so my drawing changed from back then : D

As for your one:

The moment I see a cute animal on the cover I automatically check it out, which I will do and let you know what I think of your ^___^

From the cover itself, I have no idea what to expect from the story but nevertheless I'm exited to see what it is about : D

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