Would I start reading your comic/novel based on your cover

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
Most likely yes

What's my opinion
It has mysterious vibes to it. Like what you did with the title, it really goes well with that genre.

What can be better
Not sure if the head proportions are correct. Something seems off.

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.
Thank you for the advice. I'll think about it

Good luck on your comic journey

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
seems like it's a romance story so no, it's not my cup of tea

What's my opinion
It gives this romantic vibes, I like what you did with the characters.

What can be better
Title should stick out more and I didn't notice at first there are two characters, I was looking at it for a minute. It was confusing what's going on.

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.
I will definitely change some things with my cover, tnx for the advice.

Good luck on your comic journey

[Nossumy]

Can you post the new one if you made it?

[samiluu]

I have to change the cover definetely bc it's not romance it's a fantasy (and LGBT+ ) comic about demons

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
Probably yes on the cute boy hunting it looks interesting

What's my opinion
All of your 3 covers are well done. I especially like the middle and the last one.

What can be better
First one could have better clouds.

Can you post link to all of your 3 comics?

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.

Good luck on your comic journey

[Nossumy]

yeah.... xD
I also need to change mine one because people are also getting wrong ideas

[samiluu]

the power of a cover is fascinating, isn't it?

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
No, it doesn't look interesting.

What's my opinion
Pretty generic cover for a book that I've seen a loot on amazon.

What can be better
I've read your description and the cover doesn't fit here. Maybe the girl that's controlling the water and the truck somewhere in distance. It deepens what exactly is happening in book though.

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.
Will definitely make the mist white. I've started making the mist white in comic itself so yeah...

Good luck on your book journey

[SurvivALIST]

Wow! Just saw your comment/critique. I thought this thread was inactive. Kinda waiting for some crits. Thanks for bringing this up and this was helpful especially when that novel is currently on hiatus. I'm working on a second passion project that can narrow down the world building of RUWS.

Thanks again and good luck on yours!

[lordmouri]

Sounds interesting! I'd love to hear your opinions.

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1 - This cover and the illustrations of each chapter are done by OddDaph, the artist I'm working with for this project (and others coming up).

Take a Hike! | Tapas

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2 - This cover I designed myself.

The Tale of the Red Knight | Tapas

[Nossumy]

No problem.
I didn't start replying for a few weeks maybe, because of work. Now there is a lot of them so it will take some time to reply on all those comments xD

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
Yes, it looks interesting

What's my opinion
The tittle really grabs my attention. Character looks typical for this kind of stories.

What can be better
It looks good as it is. Font can be better but not necessarily.

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.

I also like reading some cute comics after horror movies/games. xD

Good luck on your novel journey

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
Probably no

What's my opinion
It is very colourful cover, a bit to much for my taste but it's not a bad thing.

What can be better
The first word of the title is hard to read. It looks that in between letters A and D is one more but there isn't.

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.
Thanks for your advice.

Good luck on your comic journey

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
First one no because I'm not into romance.
Second one looks interesting.

What's my opinion
Fist one has lovely atmosphere to it. I like how the colours represent the music from guitar.
Second one has really interesting design.

What can be better
On the first one the right character face is a bit out of proportion. Study a bit characters in such pose.

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.
Thanks for the advice I definitely need to practice perspective.

Good luck on your comic journey

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
No, it looks like something historical.

What's my opinion
It has that old paintings vibe to it.

What can be better
The tittle can be a bit smaller, right now it's covering almost whole picture so it can't be seen fully.

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.

Good luck on your book journey

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
Most likely no, but there is a chance I would.

What's my opinion
For something that was last minute creation is not bad.

What can be better
Something in the background would be nice. Character mouth don't look natural, it looks like they were stick to his face.

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.

Good luck on your comic journey

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
Maybe yes, I'm not into romance if this is one but I really like the art style. I would probably read the description and then decide if I wanna give it a try.

What's my opinion
The overall artwork is nice/stunning. Letters for the tittle are amazingly done.

What can be better
Clouds can be drawn better.

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.
Thanks for the advice.

Good luck on your novel journey

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
Probably no

What's my opinion
Overall idea is great.

What can be better
His eyes are a bit weird, right eye is slightly bigger then the left one. His pupil could also be darker purple, right now there is not enough contrast. The eyebrows would also help although they are probably behind the helmet xD.

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.

Good luck on your comic journey

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
Maybe

What's my opinion
Cover definitely grabs my attention. Design of the letters looks a lot like they would do in anime.

What can be better
Her head is a bit to small.

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.

Good luck on your comic journey

[Nossumy]

Will I click on it
Yes

What's my opinion
Very mysterious cover that doesn't tell a lot but it still do in some way I like it.
That egg really grabs my attention xD

What can be better
Dunno xD, maybe the tree

As for my comic it's a slice of life/mystery, I'm making it so it can be for all ages.
Thanks you for the advice.

Good luck on your novel journey