Would love some feedback on my comic! Please Review

[sefra114]

Hi everyone! I've been working on my webcomic, Oni x Fox, for about a year now. This project is my very first go at webcomic making, and this story is set to go on for quite a while longer. That said, I'd love some feedback! I've yet to request real reviews and would really appreciate what people have to say. Critiques also welcome.

There's quite a bit posted, so no pressure to read it all. However, the artwork does improve significantly with each chapter!

Thanks again, I really appreciate it!

[dreamingamaris]

For this review I read the first chapter and the start of chapter two and had a look at your latest chapter to see how the art had improved. Your character designs are really cool! I love the mask designs and the relationships between the characters are really dynamic and well though out Your exaggerated expressions are really funny! The story line is easy to follow and engaging and the art is really good too. The main plot isn't obvious in the first couple of chapters so I'm not sure what the story is about yet. I'm super surprised that you only have 126 subscribers, your comic deserves way more. I'd love to read it all the way through, but I still have to move across my 180 comic reading list from my old account groan I can't really think of anything you could improve on, sorry if this isn't much help lol.

[sefra114]

It is definitely a help, thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback, it means a ton! Glad to hear you like the characters and the story is engaging. That's a huge relief, ha ha! I totally get what you mean about the plot not being apparent right away, that was definitely something I wanted input on to see if others felt the same. It'll definitely be picking up in the next few chapters Thanks again for taking the time to check out my comic, you're awesome!

[dreamingamaris]

Yay, I'm glad it helped, thank you for your lovely response!