Hey there! So I read through the first several episodes of your comic. I gotta say, the artwork is gorgeous! Your colors especially are fantastic. Art-wise I don't really have many critiques, aside from possibly taking the time to trace your 3D backgrounds and recolor them yourself so they match the rest of the art better and look less obviously like 3D models, but I don't think that's keeping you from getting or keeping readers.
For me, I had two big things with the writing that would keep me from continuing reading your comic. The biggest one is the grammar. I'm assuming English isn't your first language? The phrasing and tense isn't quite right, and it's a little difficult to understand what the characters are trying to say. I very very highly suggest getting a native English speaker to proofread your scripts so it's more accessible to a primarily English-reading audience. If people can't understand your dialogue, they can't read your comic.
The other thing for me is personal taste, honestly. I'm not a big fan of the cheesecake vibe you've got going on, and the fact that the MC turned an animal into a woman and within minutes he had sex with it. I'm sure it appeals to a certain audience, but it's very much not my cup of tea, and is mildly sexist in a way that makes me a little uncomfortable. If I feel that way, I imagine there are others who feel the same way as well.
But if you can find that niche audience who is into that sort of story (I'm sure they exist) and if you can fix your grammar, then you certainly don't have anything to worry about art-wise.
Best of luck going forward!
