BWMaste
B W Maste
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I sent you a DM. In case you didn't notice.
Hi! I sent you a DM.
Awesome art! Would you be interested in a story involving humans and non-humans that live in a secret underground world? It also has, action, adventure, and some political intrigue. I can DM you, if you want to hear more!
Ah, good question. Currently, there are four of us, including myself. As for how many? Well, I guess as many that are willing to join.
Introductions: First. Hello! I'm part of a group called BWMaste and we've been around here for a while now. Our group is currently in the development of a book series. Though someday I'd like to make it into a comic, but that's a topic for another day. Second. I'm currently in the search of any Pr…
Hello! Thanks for replying! You're right, if I hadn't checked in, I wouldn't have noticed. So, any questions, queries, etc?
Introductions: First. Hello! I'm part of a group called BWMaste and we've been around here for a while now. Our group is currently in the development of a book series. Though someday I'd like to make it into a comic, but that's a topic for another day. Second. I'm currently in the search of any Pr…
Was wondering. Do you think, if it's not too much trouble, try reading Chapter 2? Its our first action sequence of the series. So wanted to get some data on that.
Hey again! Okay, so, the characters probably need a little..... guess we'll say polishing. But what about the story itself so far? Any thoughts maybe? Oh. I'd recommend reading Chapter 2, that's when the action was supposed to get under way. If it's not too much trouble?
Huh, ok. Thanks. I'll make a note of that.
Thank you. I'll see what I can do with that.
Was hoping you could help us out. Looking for feedback, obviously. Kinda looking to see if there's any room for improvement too. In case you're wondering, our story is a contemporary piece, set in the modern day. Its a mix of sci-fi and fantasy, action, comedy, drama, and a touch of romance. Prett…
Wow! I'll be honest. This was rather unexpected, considering this post is metaphorically ancient. Still, I appreciate the response! Curious. Do you dabble in novels too? Cuz that's kind of what we need help with mostly, but, comic script would be just as good too.
Hay again! So, after thinking bout what you said. I think I've come up with a solution, it kinda seems more like a tag line from a movie poster, but then I always liked those. A more than ordinary young man. A secretive hidden world. And the journey of a lifetime. Adventure awaits you in, “Silve…
I can sorta relate. Our group was originally going to do "Silver Crest" as a webcomic, but then our artist had to drop out just as we were getting started. So, we decided to turn it into a novel. Surprisingly, it worked out better! Eventually we still want to do it as a comic series, but for now....…
Oh. Ok. Thank you! Well, thank you for the advice. It was rather informative. And I hope you'll continue to explore the rest of our future series in time. Don't be afraid to leave a comment! Until then, laters!
Thanks! Oh, and don't worry, in this case, every little bit counts. Reason I ask, is given your previous feedback. Do you think the prologue would be giving too much away? Like what to expect and all?
Ok, cool! I'll see what I can do with that. Have you had a chance to read the prologue yet?
Soooo, less "wordy" and more... mysterious? Sorry, I've always had trouble trying to find the right "hook" to draw readers in. If that makes sense?
Hello! So our group's book, "Silver Crest", has been out for a little while. It's had very little viewership over the course of it's run. I decided to post this in the hopes that you could help us do an analysis and see where our strengths and weakness' lie, and where we need improvement. Keep …
Well, I'll take a stab at it, if you're interested in knowing! Here's our synopsis- Mmmmmm, it might be hard to pick something. What would you like to know? History? Their culture? Maybe how the Blood came to be? I'd be happy to explain!
Actually, that would be an accurate assessment. We're more of a group of idea people, rather than writers, though we dabble in a bit of everything. Sorry, shoulda explained that before. My partners wrote most of the story so far, but they've been extremely busy with work in general, which just lea…
"Silver Crest"- Our story is part of a modern day setting, basically, present day Earth, but with some exceptions. Its a mix of sci-fi and fantasy, action, comedy, drama, and a touch of romance. Pretty much all the greats! Here's a link to our book- I recommend reading up to Chapter 2, thats whe…
Shucks, thanks! Yeah, he's got a long way to go before he gets to where he needs to be. Much like your character it seems!
Hi! First, nice art by the way! Well, our book is still a WIP. But it has many sub-arcs as well as the main arc. Which is of course, our hero's facing off against a great evil. Heh, the classics. Right now Book 1 will be mostly about introductions, characters, background, etc. Eventually, Book …
Well, if you'll give it a try, I'm willing to reach out! Here's our book, it's a bit of a WIP- Silver Crest Categories: Sci-Fi, Fantasy, Action, Comedy, Drama, A bit of Romance (Eventually) Any critiques or comments, etc, would be appreciated. Hope you like it!
Our group would like to. But personally, I don't know how. Been racking my brains trying to figure it out! If anybody has some ideas or ways to help. Would greatly appreciate it!
Our book is "Silver Crest". It follows the exploits of a young man named, Timothy Thompson (Tim for short) who's part of a secret order known as the "Mimics Creed". Their sworn mission is to protect an ancient race of shapeshifting creatures known as the, "Blood of the Earth". Our story is set i…
If you're interested further, you can direct message me. We can discuss it more!
Yeah, pretty much. I've tried writing on occasion a few bits here and there. But my skills are somewhat....lacking.