TheSequence

The Sequence

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Need some constructive criticisms on my novel, right now I am focusing on improving my grammar, but I would appreciate some opinions from others to improve my characters. I am getting a bit anxious about them and specially the Emperor.

I have received some really good critics and advice about my grammars and phrasings and am working on it currently but I would like to know how people see my characters. I would appreciate some advice to improve the flaws of my characters. Thanks

I would say the type of romance someone prefers to read also plays a role here. It is not as simple as not knowing to write one, it maybe the creator's preference of romance and even other genre. It's my personal experience: [I suck at writing :joy:] but the type of characters I prefer in novels and com…

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'The man sitting in the throne of the Emperor is the most cowardly person in existence. That man can set the entire world on fire if it meant to protect his power, to protect his throne. Before I realised, I already became all about talks and an empty shell inside, my life became all about protectin…