doriantorres112
Dorian
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I would like to receive your feedback on my novel. It would help me improve and hopefully grow as a writer
hello! hope you enjoy my story.
hello! gonna drop my link here
bagoong (or oyap) time. or soy sauce. i can't get behind dipping mango with salt. or dipping apple with salt. or grapefruit with salt. why do we need to dip fruit with salt. my mom bought bagoong in a jar, three of them but gave the two unopened jar to my brother while she gave me what's left of the…
managed to reach 20 subs on my story!
then i'm sorry for offending you and don't worry, tapas is one largest webcomic website aside from webtoons. you'll obtain subscribers in no time. just promote your works in the promotional threads in the forum and even try to put it in any comic or art related thread as well.
anyways i have to go now. trying to finish the fourth page of a chapter in my story. byebye!
i believe your statement, a bit. idk. haha, at least my dad likes my cats and treats them more like babies.
it's also kind of embarrassing to say but i respond back with my own baby talk. wtf. but then i do that with my cats. so, yeah. it's clear that i have issues.
i called him this afternoon for something important i wanted to discuss. he always speaks to me like those voice u use for babies, or pets. he especially does that when he and i talk on the phone. overall, he's fine. although, i wish he minimizes his time outside with the pandemic and all but work…
tomorrow is father's day and the fact is making me lose focus on my writing. it's not like i spend my days being productive but i feel a bit sluggish.
please don't ignore and disregard the advice and criticisms done by people who are willing to correct your action. It will help get the attention you want for your comic, and for yourself.
tried webnovel before too. it's so easy to get a lot of reads there, I'm surprised. but sadly, you can't delete your account which is a downside if you ever want to leave website entirely.
i don't play the game i just like the op song.
hope you enjoy!
yiiieees and now go make pasta.
@Sir_Snickerdoodles um, bruh, you'll scrape the pan. list the things you lack and buy it, my dude. in this time. lol and oil splatter is basically a test of endurance. @Kelheor oh, wow! i remember that expression from an anime years ago. -- j -- haha, and now that i have a comparison to what you…
@Sir_Snickerdoodles especially in today's time, eating out should be discouraged. and while you have to prepare alot of things before eventually eating your meal, it's still better in taste and quantity. (p.s. i like my spaghetti cold) @Kelheor - . - that's the face i came up from the pictu…
food is one of the things that makes people closer.
i miss it too, huhu. you hurt me in the deepest core of my tummy. i miss fried siomai. i might try to buy the ready made ones so i can deep fry it. also ngohiong (p.s. i spent minutes trying to find the correct spelling of the word huhu) why you restrain yourself? have a cheat day.
i really haven't tried cooking food with the convection oven, mostly baking and reheating food. so i am not really certain. although, i have always wanted to do it but with potatoes and french fry first before gradually doing something more complicated, i sadly don't have the opportunity to do so. …
then i'll send you a picture. or a gif of the cake. or an essay of how it was made and taste. pick your poison
@LCT_m_a_d i already got flashbacks from this afternoon, eating ramen for lunch with a side of crackers and pineapple slices. REMEMBER THE DAYS MY DUDES, go eat your ramen.
@Enigma_the_Slimy_Boi see, we are connected with our taste. i'd bake a ramen cake and hopefully ship a slice to your place if possible. @Sir_Snickerdoodles as someone who has that than a regular oven, i can say go for it. It also heats better than a microwave, so if you want to heat your leftover…
i'm sorry for the description but i sadly have a palate of a typical college student.
i'd try sriracha ngl. i love sriracha especially when its ramen. i wanna try making a sriracha ramen cake.