natachawolf1308
Natacha Wolf
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Hello. Just posted the first chapter of my fantasy novel. Daughter of the Sea After the death of her father, Reeva becomes captain of the Silver Lady. But an old enemy is threatening the peace on the Free Islands. She needs to find a way to protect her tribe even if she will mean to call upon …
@Deadpan_Tran & @adoel thank you for requesting! I'll try my best to have feedbacks for you by the end of the week 
Hi there. Thank you for requesting but unfortunately as the title says I offer reviews for novel not comics. I'm sorry 
My pleasure 
I like helping people when I can and it helps my writing skills in the process so win-win.
You're very welcome, it was my pleasure Keep up the great work!
If that person agrees to have their first chapter reviewed, yes of course.
Hello! Thank you for requesting, I will get to your review probably tomorrow since it's late right now where I live. Do you want the review to be in comment at the end of your chapter, in a PM or should a write it here?
Hi! Thank you for requesting. I'll probably do the review by tomorrow (it late where I live now). I see you have a prologue do you want me to read and comment on the prologue or you chapter 1?
Hi guys! I would like to offer a free first chapter review for novels under 50sub. I'm not a professional what so ever so it will just be my personal opinion. I'll do my best to be thorough and constructive. I have a full-time job so that means limited time, so please be patient. I'm not asking an…
Hello! I have to say I feel relief to see so many people over 25... I sometimes feel like I'm the only one and makes me feel like it's too late for me. Yes, I know is never too late. So I'm 29.... that's a lie I'm 30 I'm a programmer and I'm trying to write a novel in my very limited free time.
Hello fellow writers! Here's my story
Hello everyone! So my Novel is called Saoirse (means freedom in Irish) Ooo that's a hard question. I have 3 character that hold a special place in my heart. Marion (my MC) has being through a lot and will go through a lot through the story. She is strong and clever but she also has some flaws …
Hi Kitty, thank you so much for taking the time to read my first chapter and giving me your thoughts. I did think of starting from when they see the ship but I'll be honest I wasn't confident enough in my action writing skills I'll probably revisit this chapter when I'm sure I can pull it off. As …
Oh my god I'm so sorry completely forgot about the link!
Thank you for that
Hello, everyone! I'm very new to Tapas and I would love to hear your opinion on my first chapter of my Novel Saoirse. It's an adult pirate adventure story and I would be more than happy to return the favour.