rupandeyparekh2404
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I'm a BL writer here on Tapas myself, and I've been wanting to collab for a while. I'd love to work on your stories with you. I have a pretty strong command of English (went to college in USA and scored high on a bunch of proficiency tests), so I am able to work as proofreader as well. Feel free to …
I am usually in panic mode because of the views too, and even the number of subscribers, likes and comments because I'm trying to earn some money out of my writing. You need a great deal of patience: readership grows slowly. Like the others said in this forum, I'd be over the moon if I had 45 views …
A BL romance about a present-day gay Prince and a hotel manager addicted to drugs, both victims of a plot years in the making that seeks to massacre LGBTQ community members. The story seeks to portray the quotidian troubles faced by gay men which rarely ever find a public voice but which hurt them g…
I see. I really hope I don't end up in the said ten-page situation. I shouldn't, I do review the pacing in my stories, but that's not exactly my strongest point. Thanks, @nostalgicroxas and @Zinx. This is literally the first time I've been told cliffhangers aren't necessary, and it makes me feel a l…
It's so disheartening 
To make matters worse, I suck at cliffhangers.
I think my biggest problem is the chapter length. Verbosity has been an incurable problem of mine since childhood. I like to think I've put in sufficient drama, but my personal hatred for drawn-out emotional turmoil (where I come from, the soap operas are a form of torture) might have caused me to t…
The comparisons were helpful, honestly. And your insights too. I wonder what can be done to keep readers interested. It's a different kind of challenge when you don't have the visual attraction of comics.
My novel is new, so maybe I'm being impatient, but there is an uncomfortable discrepancy in the number of reads for chapter 1 and chapter 2. This is the story I am talking about: I suspect it's because my first chapter isn't engaging enough. I've modified it once and it did make a difference, …
Hi! I've recently started reading your novel. I really like it, so I've subscribed to it. I'm doing a BL novel too, it's called No Place for a Prince. I'm looking for feedback more than anything (and I am absolutely hopeless at descriptions), so you needn't subscribe if you don't like it, but a crit…